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JeSuS
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Posted : Mar 5, 2006 17:48
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cd302
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Posted : Mar 6, 2006 13:42
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hey...sounds much better, but still thereīr some issues, you really could improve. regarding the mix, itīs ok. emotions, i like em, as i said, morning style. flow: it sounds quite nice, you donīt get bored, which is an important fact, but you need to work with more climaxes, you need to build up the song a bit more. some relaxed parts, and also some more aggressive parts to make it more interesting for the listeners. itīs good, no doubt, but itīs workin all the time on the very same level. also you should work on something like a
'hookline',a catchy tune to which the songīs building up to get the whole thing a tad more outstanding. hope you get what i mean.
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JeSuS
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Posted : Mar 6, 2006 13:58
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Tnhank you very much!!! I realy need it!!!
ok. i will need to build more climaxes: snare rolls, etc.. ? More changes... And all song need to be guide to climax... I think there is 3 different parts....
Am right? This is my next home work ? 
And many ppl say that there is too many very break beats. Beat need to be more straight. What you think about this? |
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cd302
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Posted : Mar 6, 2006 15:08
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Am right? This is my next home work ?
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you got it 
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And many ppl say that there is too many very break beats. Beat need to be more straight. What you think about this?
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defintely agree with this. in the beginning itīs workinī, but later they break the flow a little, so time to get rid of some of them.
good luck
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tripy
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Posted : Mar 6, 2006 15:20
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u heard mine , i hear yours !!!
ur on the good way , music is nice feeling ,which is a good start , and your ears r on the acid sounds , gd aswell , all u need is mature more while your on the way , it will come alone to u ,
suggestions try evry 16 bars change loop or insert another line so make it more groovy , keep on working , nice work sso far
respect
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greenforestdancers
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Posted : Mar 6, 2006 15:52
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well i like it mabe compress the bass
a bit.babe its not that good but its not bad
good luck. |
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JeSuS
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Posted : Mar 6, 2006 16:11
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Tnx!!! VERY BIG THNX!
it's amazing but i meet very more experencied mature TODAY!
There is an amazing thing happening around me
Fantastix? )
i will change bass today. and try to delete breaks.
But buildups need more time. I think i will do all this things and this is will be 3 version here in next week
THANK YOU ALL!!!! |
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robomarket
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Posted : Mar 7, 2006 03:25
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Your alias is Jesus? Haah! |
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JeSuS
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Posted : Mar 7, 2006 11:04
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Eah Jesus. Maybe you remember film - Big lebowsky. There have been one person with label "Jesus" on shirt. He was demonstrate him self absolutely naked to housewife's
There was 3 years ago... My real name Vladimir, Vovan, Vovchick, Vovick, Vova In icq last year i appear as Buba Kastorsky. There is another person from russian film - "Neulovimye Mstitely". And Buba like Vova. Becouse in russian V=B |
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JeSuS
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Posted : Mar 7, 2006 11:07
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There was not so simple - change bass... Yesterday i'am used multiband compressor on kick and bass. with different bands on kick and bass. yes it sound more better but i lost top end of kick+bass... still trying... |
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JeSuS
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Posted : Mar 15, 2006 15:10
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cd302
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Posted : Mar 15, 2006 19:09
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hehe...jesus...busy as a bee;)
basement sounds much better than previous version. you also deleted these useless breaks for the benefit of the overall track flow. not much left to criticize. only thing iīd see, is to increase variety of the synthsounds a tad. i like emī, no doubt, but iīd add another synth, which can probably play a contra-part to your mainsynth to keep it more interesting over the whole length. itīs nice to see your improvements. keep up the nice work.
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JeSuS
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Posted : Mar 16, 2006 11:54
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i just need to work on a system
like system engenier
There is small contrapart played on other synth...
are you talk me about this?
And what you say about bass. I use 4 different basses in this track, but intro bass stell need improvments...
I hate make BASSSSS!!!!!!!!!
http://s63.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2YARQ46V6V0XI1XYC6E07735U1
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JeSuS
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Posted : Mar 18, 2006 17:19
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JeSuS
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Posted : Mar 19, 2006 11:12
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Nothing to compare? |
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