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tribeadelia
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rubal
Rubal / Soundkraft
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Posted : Aug 18, 2005 20:16
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a night in the jungle . with the tribe .
start jammin..guitar n african drums....
ur imagination takes u into ur own fears . tribeadelic in the head .
psy...delia... , frenzy.....chaos..
however it's only in the head ....ur fears ... the sun rises.... the mornin changes the scenario...theres nothing to be afraid off.....
tribeadelia
http://s6.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2ILAKO6HEDWTT0Z2OWOG12JK96
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psybratt
Devic
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Posted : Aug 18, 2005 21:19
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rubal ..
some good ideas in there .. have sent you pm with details ..
keep working on it ..
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Aug 19, 2005 05:05
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it seems like you need more filler say percussion or whatever just some stuff going on the background your sounds are crazy just fill this up and i also think your bassline should be a bit louder try some fx on the quote try for some more impact its just a bit too blah for me youve got the peoples attention now play with them do something unexpected use your music to take them somwhere think of it this way you are taking people for a drive while your transport has a very smooth ride and goes right to the destination it might not be the most interesting route of getting there good sound just not exciting.......yet.
keep it up
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Aug 19, 2005 05:09
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rubal
Rubal / Soundkraft
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Posted : Aug 19, 2005 08:10
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the idea was not just to make a psy trance track...its a story that ive tried to shape up in terms of sound...
the guitar and the african drums r live...(I)played n recorded.but it feels really nice to have somethin like this up my sleeve..
however theres lots more to learn .
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bam bam bhole
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Posted : Aug 20, 2005 13:52
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nice attempt
the atmosphere u ve tried 2 create is deep,mesmerising
haunting,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
the effects r deadly
the last 2 mins u ahve lost the vibe
take time & workout on it perfectly
& it will be a banger ....
" keep it up dude "
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" KEEP THE VIBES FLOWING "
 <(<({<({ Muzik is da Drug >})}>})>))>>>
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ikakook
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 22, 2005 00:50
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Pros:
1. Great for chillout feel free drinking sessions.
2. Great attempt... potential blaster if filled up more.
3. Good ideas and touches.
4. Great atmosphere. Love the ambience. Takes me back to travel boots and camp fires.
Cons:
1. Kick missing. Very flat energy.
2. Boring loops. Needs something new to happen soon... keep waiting but nothing happens.
3. Needs a better and louder baseline after the first two breaks.
Full on attempt... better than my first track for sure...
Good going rubal... hope to hear a lot more... keep at it. |
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rubal
Rubal / Soundkraft
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Posted : Aug 23, 2005 07:51
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plz leave a post here....just in case the link on yousendit stops working.
ill put it up again on the post.
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Loki1
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 23, 2005 09:42
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Soooo u finallly released it ....... awesomee!!!
well like i said b4 i love ur track and ur ideas .... and i thot we agreed that the kick is missin ,a heavier bassline is required ..... which will help tremendously in givein the trak more energy, ya
.... then y the hell did u put this up without workin on it again ...
bud ur music sense is simply superb .... so i expected u 2 release a ntn less than perfect trackk ..
anyways kudos 
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rubal
Rubal / Soundkraft
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Posted : Aug 23, 2005 11:33
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Repeat
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Posted : Aug 23, 2005 12:05
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Hey mate,
The intro is cool... and after about 3.30s it get's real good, love that middle bit till around 6.20.
work with that bit and you'll have a stormer.
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a large scoop of manala
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Posted : Aug 23, 2005 16:42
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Sorry Rubal...all i got was this>>File Transfer: Incorrect link
You have clicked on an invalid or stale link......  |
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Raoul V
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Posted : Aug 23, 2005 20:06
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not a bad first attempt at all.... your ideas are great and your working well with your samples, but what struck me as 'missing' was some synth work. U need more synths in there for sure, with some synth work to give your sounds more depth....
Your sounds are clear but your kick and your bass need to be compressed and eq'd better. For ur kick use like a 1:1 ratio so it stands out over your bass and other sounds.
Also compressing your fx, (using presets as a starting point is fine if you dont know how to do it) is a must but they must be at higher ratio's and lower thresholds.
Dont be afraid to throw 2 or 3 synths ontop of eack other, to get a phatter sound... what works for me in a good track is thick sounding leads that fits over the bassline like a glove...
Anyways these are just some ideas for you, but BOOM with ur first effort and i wish you all the best... pm me when u have sum new music...
Killer, KEEP IT UP
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Bloodclot
Bloodclot
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Posted : Aug 24, 2005 08:24
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Hey Rubal.. Thanks for informing about your new track. I'm not very technically inclined and don't know much about making music. I just know what sounds good to my ears  .. I know it always isnt easy getting your idea's down while making the music thats playing in your head. I'm not convinced that this is how you'd want this track to sound. I'm sure you could work to get a harder bassline (or rather some what that it sounds better)
Hope this helps somehow!
Boom!
PS: Yeah, I would agree .. when your track reaches 6:20 its pretty neat. Sounds still kinda hazy or mayb its my headphones! |
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Marquis
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Posted : Aug 24, 2005 10:15
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Nice track, full of good ideas... Not easy to include 1) tribal with bit of oriental touch in a track and keep it "classy", and 2) all these sounds and keep it harmonius 
I agree with the other reviews about working the bass, and bit of surprises although IMHO, if mixed properly, a track could be "a surprise" on its own
(by the way, there is a track from the early 2000 called "crazy ppl" and a vocal goes "this is a place for crazy ppl, but am not crazy"
and thx for sharing and keep it up, big potential... like the message of your track: keep high hopes, no matter what 
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