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*** ShroomVision - Dica in the dungeons (demo) ***

ShroomVision


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Posted : Jul 28, 2005 00:30
Hey everybody
I'd like you guys to preview an edit of my first track.

You can download it from here:

http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=01I7WFL71FI561MS297Q6U1AD4

It's 4 and a half minz.. dark acid .. lots left to do .. but do temme what you think.

I'd love to hear come constructive criticism and feedback from you guys.. wateva u wanna say.. jus let me know yeh?

Thanx!


ShroomVision


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Posted : Jul 28, 2005 05:29
ShroomVision


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Posts :  110
Posted : Jul 28, 2005 18:54
Well.. well, what an fukin fabulous response

Just in case 10 mb is too long, ive uploaded it at 128kbps half the size... now will somebody preview?!

http://s32.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=30CMO8T6VQI4X1XPH1HTZZES45

CLAW
CLAW

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Posted : Jul 28, 2005 21:01
ok

nice intro sounds very clean...
nice kick games

hm yous kick and bass is a bit weird, maybe try to find another kick like this http://s14.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2YA18YLYRUPSH0SU4PP38GPFAE

u have good synths man, but the synth that comes in 1:50 i dont realy like it because i think is off tone...

u have good ideas in the demo, but they are the same in all the track...
Try to use this ideas with different patterns each time, also try to add some more drumz, like snare, or open hat...

3:39 u started something else, which is a lot different from the previous part..
bass in this part is weird, it lacks some low freqs...

but i like your ideas with the synths
keep it up

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ShroomVision


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Posted : Jul 28, 2005 21:51
Thanx for the feedback claw baba and kick also

the comments are of loads help. I am already working on them



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Lithium
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posts :  646
Posted : Jul 31, 2005 22:27
hi ShroomVision

i like this style a lot, this concept of dark proggy, very nice atmospheres created. i like the story of the track and also the change at 3:40 very diferent but fitting nice on the track.
the only thing i think you should improve is the mix, giving more power to the kick and also filling the track with more drum combinations.

very good work indeed.
keep posting
ShroomVision


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Posted : Aug 1, 2005 04:32
Hi Lithium

Thanx for the comments and the suggestions. They're going to be of much help to me!

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AstRoMetriX
Astrometrix

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Posted : Aug 1, 2005 11:30
hi shroomvision.........
wow nice style man.....i like.....
like you said:its not finished but cool direction!!
i think maybe try to think: SFX!!!!
like ppl wrote you have good ideas......i liked the bassline...sounds kinda plastic...hehehe
mmmmmm....did you use korg(micro/ms2000)maybe for the arp in the begining????
i guess you like kindzadza......or other russian artists

very nice...work on it.....give us some more!
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agnindhana
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Aug 1, 2005 11:41

i have sent u a personal message with my feed back....

just wanted to say that i really like the style...

keep up the good work..





ShroomVision


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Posts :  110
Posted : Aug 2, 2005 01:36
@ AstroMetrix : Thanx baba for the comments.. Yep, i do like Kindzadza, but love other artists from all over as well and other styles apart from dark also.. anything that carries your tripp .. Umm, no i didn't use korg for the beginning though, ill check n tell ya

@agnindhana: Great to hear from you after a really long time buddy. Your feedbacks really great help. Looking forward to seein u soon.
Karma Konnect
Karma Konnect

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Posted : Aug 2, 2005 02:57
Niceee oneee broo ....

..... just that its a demo ...


make it 8 :40 .... Killlaaaaaaaaaaa....




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FaceHead
FaceHead

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Posts :  1555
Posted : Aug 2, 2005 11:14
begining abstract could be a really twised break from a dark set the beeew beew beew beew sound is off beat dont know if you tried it but it sounds messy to me bassline a bit repetitve for my taste but good kick bass and synths i would just personally like to hear it cleaned up alittle and some more small breaks added to separate the repeating bass line but ya i agree make more length maybe go for a big break in the middle with one last hoorah peak part

please return the favor of a review at www.myspace.com/facehead

thanks

facehead
FaceHead
FaceHead

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Posted : Aug 2, 2005 11:16
oh ya i agree the kick sounds wierd at second thought needs to be clearer to much mid
ShroomVision


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Posted : Aug 4, 2005 10:02
@ *psystar* - thanx dude, no 8: 40.. but dica part-II in work.. :-D

@facehead - will review ya in some time .. offbeat intentionally.. rest of feedback taken . thanx for da time.

People of da dark.. dload an review pls! Thanx.
Fingax
Cosmic Station

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Posted : Aug 4, 2005 23:18
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