Psypepper
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jan 27, 2005 07:21
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On 2004-12-30 11:28, Mike A wrote:
First of all, I must say that it's a very good track. I was surprised, I thought I'm gonna hear some crap hardcore at 160 bpm, but this is much better
Things you should work on:
In the beginning 0:40 there is new sound that comes in, I really think it is out of tune. Check what's going on there, and fix it.
You also need to work on the overall levels of stuff. Kick & bass, also percussions are too silent. Look here for example: http://forum.isratrance.com/viewtopic.php/topic/52146/forum/26 (if it's still up) how everything is nicely balanced.
Since you have no monitors it will be hard to hear it all for yourself so you'll have to keep comparing with other pro tracks.
Basically good track, good structure and I quite liked it. Just the sound and that out of tune sound I told you.
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