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Psynaesthesian
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Posted : Sep 22, 2006 17:49
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Whazup fellow psy heads!!!
Link below is a rough skeletal structure of a track i'm struggling quite a bit to finish!!
Pre-warning .. the intro is a bit long (round a minute-but i love the monologue) so pls bear 
http://download.yousendit.com/F31C3E5A47744482
Appreciate your review and feedback!!
And as always .. comments, suggestions for change, critiques are more than welcome!!
PS - Any ideas where this track can head??
O - And pls donnot hesitate to PM me in case of any glitches with the link!
B'om Shankara!!
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Psynaesthesian
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Posted : Sep 22, 2006 19:35
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0v3rd0s3d
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Posted : Sep 22, 2006 19:51
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hi, no problem 
well, nice intro i like the panning thing u did eheh however it seems a bit long ..
nice synth games ^^ missing groove in the track, more drum loops to fill it and make it danceable (:
u did create a nice mood with this track ^^
but i think it is a but monotonous, and lacks of groove in it eheh
nice job
stay good
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Psynaesthesian
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Posted : Sep 22, 2006 19:58
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Thanx Ov3r!!
Will work on it!!
B'om Shankara!!
"... b'om ..." |
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positive control
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Posted : Sep 22, 2006 20:39
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listening
like the start...
a little bit long...
woow...good bass,me like kinda thissss...
dynamic...
some changes could happen...
anyway this is a track i could say will be to something=)
great job=)
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Overhuman
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Posted : Sep 22, 2006 20:52
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well i like large intros but i think u should add more diynamism to it so it can be not too monotonic .. when the kick comes in its really nice really nice qualiity ! nice fx and melodies ... perfecto for begingn some dj set or live
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Psynaesthesian
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Posted : Oct 4, 2006 16:19
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Sup Guys ...
The revival .... 3rd comming!!
Thanx to all who shared their comments, critiques and tips ... it's really helped!!
The whole intro is too long so i've just cut to the chase ....
(-Watch the bass equaliser (keep lil low).. set to your preference level. I'm still in the process of learning to control this ... BASSic suggestions are very welcome  )
What next?
(Hang on guys -- problem with link!!)
Eagerly awit your feedback!!
B'om Shankara!!
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Psynaesthesian
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Posted : Oct 4, 2006 16:53
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BLiXeM
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Posted : Oct 4, 2006 17:35
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First of all, thanx for your comment on my track...
While this music is not really my cup of tea, it certainly has a some potential...
I think there's to much mid-freqs in the track, and very little highs...the hi-hats could be more upfront...
I would lower some of the mid-freqs in the bassline, so that your leads don't have to be so loud, to make it fit better...
But the arrangement is very nice, and i think you can make people crazy on the dancefloor with it, keep up the good work...
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Oct 4, 2006 18:53
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Really enjoyed the track!
I liked your Synth work! Good work and Keep it up!
Let us know once it is done!
Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet |
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Alex - Aural Invasion
Aural Invasion
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Posted : Oct 5, 2006 01:23
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i think it sounds much the same same over again, and a bit going nowhere if u know what i mean. Potential def! But needs more drive, more excitement and more control imo
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reverbnation.com/auralinvasion
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xaBBu
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Posted : Oct 5, 2006 11:50
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Nice one ...
Synths are talking, maybe just the percussion needs some more variation... but thats a matter of taste I guess. Due to it being 128k this maybe encoding issue, but the high freqs seem to be a little dull. (cant tell though, 128k almost everytime fools my ears).
It would be cool to have a more "peaking" part into the track. some synth rises or something, right now it sounds a little "empty" or "dry".
so now enough critics, dont take all my writing too serious... this is just brainstorming while listening to the track 
hear from you in the future, I hope
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Psynaesthesian
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Posted : Oct 5, 2006 18:09
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Thanx everyone for your feedback ... much appreciated .. it's really helping me understand more of what i'm doing and giving me direction towards what i want or ought to be doin!!
It's back to the drawing board for now ...
and watch this space!!
B'om Shankara!!
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Freeflow
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Posted : Oct 5, 2006 18:56
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ill review in a blunt way, but bare with me...
Intro needs spice, something exciting. .
the bass Groove is good, but you need more percussions that closes the circle...something that drives this piece more forward..
shuku shuk shuku shhuu
shuku shuk shuku shhuu
add some motion to that and you understand the rhythm i mean hehe... like a simple shaker pattern.. the last hit is open,( like in a openhihat)
so concentrate to work more the the percussion.. it will do MUCH...
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psytheriatsunami
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Posted : Oct 6, 2006 01:39
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nice track, synths and fx are good.
i dont like the intro.
i agree with these guys about the high frequencies i think a nice EQ would be enough.
really like your synth lines.
i dislike the beat.
i think percs are very repetitive.
i think it would be nice with short and dinamic breaks.
i disagree wih those that say its repetitive but think that synth should be grow progressivly until reaching a point where xplodes.!!!!
and for the ending, somehow i hate how you end it.
my conclusion: nice track, nice sounds, not very my style but enough for me to enjoy it also demostrates that you have great ideas.
PEACE MAAAAAAN!
thanx 4 cheking my track!
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