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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 00:28
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 01:48
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 03:24
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 13:22
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Nathan
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 14:00
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imho you need to Build better bridges between all the parts of your track. You need to come with a ready Idea before you sit in front of the computer - because its seems to be very random work. Sure some parts need to be invented on the way but the general idea should be there..
Sometimes the sound doesn't go along with the bass line.
You got skills and I am sure you'll get there- its only matter of time. Just listen a lot to music - not only to enjoy it but be aware to every single sound and passage, and also write a lot.
Lish VS. Yotopia - intoxicated
this track is good example for perfect structure; well built bridges but there are many many more….
So good luck
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 14:34
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On 2006-02-25 14:00, Nathan wrote:
Lish VS. Yotopia - intoxicated
this track is good example for perfect structure;
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that was one of the tracks I listened during the creation of this one. Of course I have lots of stuff to learn before I will be able to write music like this. time is the X factor here.
thanks for the warming words Nathan, future tracks will be way better Im sure!
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Nathan
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 14:43
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No Problemo  -=The Meaning Of Life Is To Give Life A Meaning= |
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 19:40
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its real slow for a prog tune,that doesnt help for all the rest.
Thats y its loosing its vibe
There are some cool sounds but are overused.
Ur lead and the melody
coming on 6 min completly out of pitch.
Is that a virus thats playing?
want to trade some cool sounds if it is?
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 21:04
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On 2006-02-25 19:40, index wrote:
its real slow for a prog tune,that doesnt help for all the rest.
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if you listened to the Hi-Fi version from soundcick, its a bug or something they have because they lowered the BPM rate somehow. download from Yousendit.com
virus/? hahaha its V-Station
trade sounds? make them! its more fun mate
bom
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diskOtek
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Posted : Feb 25, 2006 21:12
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just listening to your track!
u ve got some pretty good soundz in it but u gotta do sumthing wit hthe breaks!
for instance,the one around 3-4min!yea,and try to switch bpm a little more up to check how it soundz!
enough with criticism  -u got beautiful melodies,nice synth sounds and generally samples,good bass and kick!
its a good one!
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Feb 26, 2006 00:33
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thanks Disco!
dunno what is wrong with the breaks, i liked them.
but ill improve everything i was told next time!
cheers
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diskOtek
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Posted : Feb 26, 2006 06:52
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imo therez not something WRONG as i think that something is MISSING!
that listener expects something more maybe diverse from each break!
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RenderingRebel
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Posted : Feb 28, 2006 01:18
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First listened to the slow version on soundclick, hehe
Okay now the good version: Nice kick and bass thats for sure(what did you use for the bassline)
Can use some more sound with lots of reverb to create a more full feeling in the beginning.
Buildup is really nice, and your sounds sound great
Really like the way the hihats come in
The sounds u use create a lot of space, i like that =D
Some of the breaks sound like there's something missing like the other people here already said.
But you definitely need some more sounds to spicen up the track a bit.
The last melody is a bit cheesy, but still nice
The end needs some work, i think
Overal nice track !
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Feb 28, 2006 01:40
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Disco, next time will deal with it maybe some full on stuff will come out eventually
thanks Rebel. yeah, more sounds is the problem for now, and i nead to put more reverbs and panning games.
bom and thanks!
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Nanotek
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Posted : Mar 1, 2006 02:23
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I liked it
I usualy don't aprecciate much progressive but this one sounded good
Nice synths and melodies, bass line, percussion...
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