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Psylosoph
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Posted : Mar 8, 2007 00:05
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Psylosoph
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Posted : Mar 8, 2007 00:59
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sry i decided not to share it
i dont think there is enough feedback here |
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MarcosJr
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Posted : Mar 9, 2007 04:52
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man... keep going.... this track is amazing!
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dija
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Posted : Mar 9, 2007 08:40
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Nice intro, some of the percussions are perhaps a bit sharp but nice job on interweaving these various loops 
The intro was strong but I didn't feel like the song ever went anywhere. The intro grabs my attention but theres nothing in the meat of the song to hold my interest. There's actually more going on at the intro than at any other point in the song. There is no melody to be found which is essential for anything progressive imo. If you don't want to use melody at least throw some sound fx in there to bring some interest. In spite of all this I'd have thought the rythm section would have been more interesting since the song lacks in other areas but the rythm is uninteresting as well with the exception of the intro.
I realize the song is supposed to be minimal but this is the absolute extreme and too minimal imo.
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Alias
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Posted : Mar 9, 2007 13:36
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Tuetrax
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Posted : Mar 9, 2007 16:23
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real good track, i like! |
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Psylosoph
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Posted : Mar 9, 2007 20:37
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Thanks all, I already continued adding more stuff to the song as others said the same things you did. I did some melodic part.. when there is more developement I will do another upload w |
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aQuaFeeLL
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 9, 2007 21:26
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Well i must say that the track is pretty good.Nice groove you have.Nice bass.Kick is ok.Fx are super.
I think you can put mooooore synth lines.I dunno just my opinion.But you are on your way.  Well done.
All the best.
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Psylosoph
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Posted : Mar 11, 2007 20:10
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thanks mate |
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Psylosoph
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Posted : Mar 14, 2007 00:32
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yo every1, i updatet the file, added some melodies.. |
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MarcosJr
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Posted : Mar 14, 2007 17:04
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k downloading =DD |
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Mar 14, 2007 17:13
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not bad!
but... its getting far to minimal and it realy needs to be more melodic towards the end to keep the listener interested !
u have done some nice work with the sounds but u luck a sense of story!
i didnt like the doubled bassline in the middle its not fitting with the rest !
overall have to work more on adding some elements to keep it growing and climaxing!
orange
 http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
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MarcosJr
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Posted : Mar 14, 2007 17:15
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isnt hihat little loud? i dont know if its really little loud, just my opinion |
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MarcosJr
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Posted : Mar 14, 2007 17:15
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but i like the modifications =D |
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psy#groover
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Posted : Mar 16, 2007 00:51
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really nice tune u have there! i love ur percusions but u have to try more in the synths parts imo. keep going bro i like to hear more stuff from u!
all the best
nik
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