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new energy......reviews pls
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godess on roll
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 01:53
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insane
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 02:32
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something extraordinarily weird...
i guess u need a bassline???
some more fx,ur intro seemed interesting,till 38 secs, after which i dont know everything was missing,,
seriously short demo to tel ya hhow the trac is!
plus, i feel u need to work more on it.
keep working......
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godess on roll
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 02:48
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well buddy pls tell me that u 've heard only till 38 sec or more than that? coz its not possible that after that everything was missing ive applied a hell lotsa fx on my melodies if u have a headphones than pls listen to the PAN ,delays,phazers etc.............yeah its a short demo
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NikC
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 02:49
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how strange...
Needs alot of work in my opinion... can't really feel the energy that much  ,needs crisper synths and percussion, If you are trying to do a Necton-ish bassline you need alot more punch and depth to it.
Also (in headphones) odd stereo spacing... different sounds at different widths
Also, IMO i feel the more melodic sounds should (unless i'm hearing wrong) be in the same key?
Still... its your track!
Needs more work IMO but feel some interesting ideas coming through ...
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godess on roll
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 02:50
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and its for 1:58 @ 145bpm
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godess on roll
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 02:57
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hey thanx insane and nikC i guess im juss experiementing and tryin to make progressive with a lil indian touch....
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insane
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 03:26
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experimenting is the key, no doubt
wat i meant with the missing part was that i expected a banger after 38 seconds, which wasnt there,,didnt know ur making a progressive trac..but still...
hope u can upload the whole , or atleast 90 % of the trac..for wider review...
guess reviews are for making ur work better..
anyways.. best of luck.
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askazi
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 06:23
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some more layers to it.....
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ramy(spiritual world)
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 07:46
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kerryyyyyyyy  ......huuuuuuuu....very good my frd..really i like this progressive track.. 
!!..BOOM SHANKAR..!! 
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Lucid Dragon
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 12:56
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i really like the tabla-ish (?) bits in the start
but ... as already said before... u need to add more sstructure and layers to the track
and since yr heading in a proggy direction (which is really cool btw) i think u need to add a much much groovy bass line, as right now .. u cant really hear one very clearly
also ... maybe u want to space the sounds a bit more, rather than simply one after the other? i dunno im not a producer but this is just what i feel ..
also .. some mmore melodic sounds could be used to great effect,if they arent over used ..
saying that, it taked lots of time and effort to build a track, and yr heading the right direction
keep it up godess, and haopefullly we'll get to hear the comppleted track !
Bom ...
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Shaqattack
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 13:41
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hey i really like the overall feel of the track...love the stuff used towards the end..dunno what sounds they r but r really really good...
lil more into the track and we shall have a nice piece to listen to...
good work...... |
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Redlink
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Posted : Jan 22, 2005 14:25
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Hi India goddess! 
Sounds interesting, but needs much more work!
I like the begining, indian sounds always inspired me but you need to work more on kick and bassline! Get a groovy one and the track will be much better than before! And like NikC said you need more crispier synths and percursion! 
Turn that track into a great track! Keep working, girl!
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Yidam
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Posted : Jan 23, 2005 01:05
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interesting work ...
not really progressive though ... more minamalistic. which is cool...
base could use a little more power. this migrane kick is a bit cliche nowadays... maybe a break in between too... or just double up the tabla sounds. plus the breakdown at 1:35 is a bit short and too predictable... its the regular "thump wait thump wait thump wait boom" .....
can u post the whole track ? would help for a better review.
PS ... great effort/new sound ... a little more work and cleaning and i would be more than happy to play this track at night.
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psykoactiv
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Posted : Jan 23, 2005 01:05
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ur ideas are good.. but if ur into progressive then ur flow neads to spread over a larger span.. the flow of ur synths i mean... like adding more delays to them n all.. and longer riffs..
hope i make sense.. and its constructive criticism
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godess on roll
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Posted : Jan 23, 2005 10:16
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hey thanx askazi , ramy(spiritual world) , Lucid Dragon , Redlink , va¤n , psykoactiv .
im working on the bassline will put the track (90%) as soon as im finished working on it......really thankfull for all you taking out a moment for my track.AND I PROMISE ITS GONNA BE A MIND BLOWING TRACK.
godess on roll
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