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My Masterpeice
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Norman BeatZ
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 15, 2006 20:50
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Norman BeatZ
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 16, 2006 09:43
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is there no one who liked it ?
peace
robin |
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Freeflow
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Posted : Mar 16, 2006 09:44
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crazy track...
nice tricks for sure, and good use of FX and panorama!
some groovy parts here and there... overall its nice, but im missing the theme, it just sounds like a track with lots of tricks and nice grooves 
like i said you got the groove... but the red thread is not completely there... and sometimes it dont have to be either, chaos is nice aswell...
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Mar 16, 2006 19:53
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On 2006-03-16 09:44, New Era Scientist wrote:
crazy track...
nice tricks for sure, and
good use of FX and panorama!
Hey robin ..
You got the most of the all answer from New Era
Scientist but at the same time there is some little
things that i think u should have put some more
atantion , inspection and distinction with/in .
In this track what i like that there is
more arrangement . Vol are much better
and seems things and elements are
runnig great aswell .. Realy cool all this games
up there and i could be connected to the
story (and also dig in some parts) But true ..
Somthing are realy missing here
and i think that is the down work cause
all the ups are madness and fun and look
realy professional . I think is the power
.. There is some parts in the track that
the bass is gone and this is the directly prob
Also kik is abit low for insane
track like this and maybe you should
change them both .
Good synth .. Taking u to the right places .. !
Didt like the end 06:47-07:19 think u
can do it better and makes us get down
and land from this flight in other feel
and in a defferent way .
Didt liket the riotousness of the talking pads ..
I think that there is to much there . Try using
1 voice (Talking) in your tracks or max' 2 its
taking the listener out of focuse from
the real thing .
Overal realy good one and improve , Cheers !
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LuSiD
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Posted : Mar 17, 2006 00:01
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I like it a lot. The pads are pretty damn psychedelic. I don't really like the "save the whales" part, but whatever.
I kinda feel like the whole track is building to something that it never gets to, though.
I would like to hear a big clear synth line creep up and take me to the next level of the track.
Overall. I think its great. Keep up the good work, and wierd ideas.
Blessings,
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah
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Posted : Mar 17, 2006 00:10
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Good stuff, most have been said and I dont have too much to add.
personally i dont like those "only low freq" basslines, i would definatly add some punch.
nice stuff
cheers
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Norman BeatZ
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Posted : Mar 17, 2006 11:10
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Alright thanx alot dudes, for the inspiring feedback
will probobly have the updated version ready til monday, working on the main synth ^^
Peace
Robin |
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Norman BeatZ
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Posted : Mar 17, 2006 16:22
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Norman BeatZ
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Posted : Mar 17, 2006 23:19
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is there anybody out there ? ^^
peace
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energytick
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 17, 2006 23:23
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Hey nice work man...really like your mind.
here r a few points though
*Kick is weak and lacks presence
*Bass is to "square" and too low frequency!
*No breaks! u gotta put breaks in!
*precussions lack deffenition, maybe over reverb on them ;>
bottom line - stay off fruity loops :>>>
other than that, nice job, although my taste is much faster...
and btw:when u title a subject "My Masterpeice " dont be suprised to get tired response out of it...u cant crown ur own work as a masterpeice...gotta have someone else do it :>
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Norman BeatZ
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Posted : Mar 17, 2006 23:45
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On 2006-03-17 23:23, energytick wrote:
Hey nice work man...really like your mind.
here r a few points though
*Kick is weak and lacks presence
*Bass is to "square" and too low frequency!
*No breaks! u gotta put breaks in!
*precussions lack deffenition, maybe over reverb on them ;>
bottom line - stay off fruity loops :>>>
other than that, nice job, although my taste is much faster...
and btw:when u title a subject "My Masterpeice " dont be suprised to get tired response out of it...u cant crown ur own work as a masterpeice...gotta have someone else do it :>
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maybe we just have differnt kind of taste when it comes to music bruv
i think there is both breaks and good percussion, will work on the kick though 
Havent made this song in FL studio, Reason 3.0 and sound forge 8, mixed in nuendo
and this is a "masterpeice" to ME cuz this is not the kind of music i do generally, theres nothing wrong with being a little bit proud of the final product after many nights of intense mixing is there ?
peace
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Freeflow
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Mar 18, 2006 01:12
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If this is your master piece i would not bother to listen to your next tracks haha
just kidding...
i think energytick meant if you want feedback you should be humble....
but i dont see anything wrong with putting your self on a pedestal.... if nobody else does it 
i think its good to feel good about what you do!
Good luck in future creations!
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energytick
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Posted : Mar 18, 2006 01:17
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Ofcrourse u need to be humble
and u need to learn to take CRASHING criticism, coz u need to understand that's what people hearing (at least ME, but u dont need to listen to me)
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energytick
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Posted : Mar 18, 2006 01:23
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forgot to mention: u'r better off with Fruity then with reashon hehe
and ur best with just plain old cubase (not nuendo)
and btw: if u want feel free to kick my ass about the track i posted...
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Norman BeatZ
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Posted : Mar 20, 2006 13:41
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On 2006-03-18 01:23, energytick wrote:
forgot to mention: u'r better off with Fruity then with reashon hehe
and ur best with just plain old cubase (not nuendo)
and btw: if u want feel free to kick my ass about the track i posted...
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I respect ur feedback i just think we have differnt opinions man, what kind of programs we use is all about taste and u can do basiclly the same music in all of them its all about what ure comfortable working with ...
peace
Robin |
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