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my first track - dark twisted style
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jaramogi
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Posted : Oct 15, 2004 13:53
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The Ronin
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Posted : Oct 15, 2004 21:17
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Nice start to your production, looking forward to hearing more from you. One suggestion for the very beginning of your track... the kick/bass line should start a little sooner. For maximum effect, try starting the kick just before the engine sample starts to decay. Might give you the whip that makes people crazy. Good luck!!! |
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jaramogi
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Posted : Oct 16, 2004 13:10
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thx for the tip ronin
will try out a new start of the track and look for the effect  |
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djgargamel
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Posted : Oct 19, 2004 18:18
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bom, respect jaramogi, i like the dark twisting style & the fact that you try to bring new ideas in your music...
KEEP IT GOING, i´m more than sure that we will hear from you soon again!
cheers,
gargamel
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djgargamel
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Posted : Oct 19, 2004 18:20
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...dark twisted acidelic sounds is what we need! And never forget... lets "Fuck The System" hähähä
bOOm
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jaramogi
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Posted : Oct 19, 2004 19:36
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thx gargamel |
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Triptocoma
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Posted : Oct 19, 2004 23:32
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nice ideas...
you should look into changing the kick and maybe the bass aswell...
something more powerful would fit better... a deeper bass would bring it to a new level...
but thats just my opinion, do it your way...
i really like the sounds... id be glad to hear more from you..
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jaramogi
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Posted : Oct 21, 2004 18:47
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thx man |
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Redlink
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Posted : Oct 21, 2004 19:31
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Hi Jaramogi! 
I agree with Triptocoma, you should fix the bass and the kick... Must get more powerfull ones, i'm sure you can do better than that! I like the fx and the voice! The pads sound really creepy! 
Have a good time all the time! |
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jaramogi
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Posted : Oct 21, 2004 20:17
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hey guys, want to thank you for your feedback!!!
this track was a session of one day - i know i must fix bass & kick and do something for the arrangement/flow
will update this track when it "definite" finish
thx, for your support, hope to hear more....
boom
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Spindrift
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Posted : Oct 21, 2004 21:09
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Nice eeirie atmosphere.
I really appreciate this kind of night music with a lot of space.
I think some more push in the hihats would be nice though. The bassline sequence sounds a bit hesitant, which could maybe be improved with a shorter bass sound.
Now it feels like it holds back the track a bit.
Like your style...hope to hear more from you as well
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jaramogi
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Posted : Oct 22, 2004 16:49
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thx, spindrift
good tip with the shorter notes! (i also thought that the bassline is holding the track a little bit back --> but haven't any idea how to fix this problem - now i can try it out, hope it works
thx
boom
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jaramogi
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Posted : Oct 27, 2004 22:38
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thx and keep it rocking too ellis  |
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Kryptum
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Posted : Oct 28, 2004 01:45
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Great TunE JaraMoGi!!
really a blast,great atmosphere.
keep it up man,u know how to do it!
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hipsylon
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Posted : Oct 28, 2004 19:09
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kewl effects! the bass sounds cool too..!
psy r0x!
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