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my first track - dark twisted style
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jaramogi
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Posted : Oct 29, 2004 17:36
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thx guys
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jaramogi
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Posted : Feb 1, 2005 22:50
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Hayez
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Posted : Feb 2, 2005 02:50
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good work dude, it sounds dark, like your ideas and sounds.
it's not finished yet, the arrangement is confused. get the story right if you had one in mind. the break that comes on 2:20 is good but you exit realy week. don't like the voice that comes and the guitar like sound. things should take off from there and develop. work more and you'll have good one.
 "a new art came into my mind which only you can create, the Art of Noises, the logical consequence of your marvelous innovations." Russolo, 1913 |
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PoM
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Posted : Feb 2, 2005 19:45
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nice idea you got but plz change the voice a 2.20  think to the guys on lsd who hear that in partys lol |
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jaramogi
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Posted : Feb 3, 2005 00:07
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thx guys for the feedback... he he, maybe i need one session more
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lol 
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insane
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Posted : Feb 3, 2005 01:14
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nice going jaramogi dude,,
this is exactly wat we need now,
twisted dark shit
uve made the trac in ur style..thats wats imp..the sounds used are gonna destroy everyones eardrums,
goog going man,for sure will be waiting for more tunes from u,and as people said, harder kick and a darkker bassline will change the whole trac
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Feb 3, 2005 13:05
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Hey Jaramogi, Really like your track man. Some really nice sounds in there. I liked the end to the track. especially the voice (synth?) that starts at 6:00, its got a nice eerie feeling.
Good Luck Bro and Keep Going! 
Rather than feeling that you're about to have the rug pulled from under you, let me teach you how to dance on a flying carpet |
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jaramogi
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Posted : Feb 7, 2005 16:17
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thx alot guys
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Gambi
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Posted : Feb 8, 2005 23:34
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"The bassline sequence sounds a bit hesitant, which could maybe be improved with a shorter bass sound.
Now it feels like it holds back the track a bit."
Exactly! Very nice track indeed, but the bassline is qiute annoying... Turn down the Release and make it roll just a little bit more, you could do that by adding another 1/16 so it is "kick|bass|bass|bass".
I hope you understand me, I have no other way of explaining it - at leat not in English. |
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Xamanist
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Posted : Feb 9, 2005 17:52
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excelent excelent track my friend jaramogi!
this is what i call inteligent dark shit
very good in sound and structure
keep up buddy, you style is very good!
i'm already waiting for the next...
boom boom
Sérgio Xamanist
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Kryptum
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Posted : Feb 10, 2005 02:02
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Hy jaramogi!
Great song you got here!Nice mad ideas,pretty good construction,this one should make lots of dust in the dancefloor!I think everything is fine,except the bass,I would do like Gambi said...cut some relase.everything else sounds very good!
keep up the good work and good luck for your upcoming gig!!!!!!!
take kare
Cheers from portugal!!!!!!!!!
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jaramogi
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Posted : Feb 13, 2005 23:27
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thx for the nice words
will make a few changes and post it again, but this takes time
cheers
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jowy333
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Posted : Feb 15, 2005 11:48
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nice pads. kind of reminded me of Bug Funk. All in all nice track please continue your work. Was that Del you sampled? |
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jaramogi
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Posted : Feb 17, 2005 14:15
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thx alot jowy
he he and particularly thx to blood manson for this constructive feedback   |
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psycho rasta
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Posted : Feb 17, 2005 18:51
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it sound good but not hard enought,i like hard twisted psycadalic tunes with freaky sounds and hi bpm.
try again u r in the right direction just increase the base and cange to rhytem.
good luck!
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