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squ1d
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Posted : Oct 20, 2005 23:04
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squ1d
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 01:44
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FaceHead
FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 01:55
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couldnt read the file its final cut format????? |
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squ1d
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 01:58
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mm?
its simple mp3 vbr highest quality export...
weird..
try listening trough acidplanet, i think its easier =) |
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FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 02:18
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wow. thats definately complete insanity first off and most important you need some better bass i couldnt really hear it what i did sounded not so good. Second i think there is a timing issue between the bass/percussion and the kick/synths they sound to be one beat off. third i think your arrangment is nuts in agood way but your synths need work not the patterns so much just the sound they are making automate some filters and use some modulation on them if a single note sounds good the rest of the pattern will probably sound better as is now you take everything else away and play a single synth note some of them would just sound like anoying beeps add some reverb to a beep and it can sound great im very enthusiastic about this song but it needs somuch work as is.
your beginning was good and your kick is kinda old sounding but thats ok for now its still bassy and it worked for misted muppet like the synth at 1:25 good notes but not dynamic try delay and reverb your melodies are great the high synththat comes in on the break is bad for my ears good melody though ok that lower synth sound better with the filter but still try fxfxfxfxfxfx! your builds and crashes are great!!
could you review mine?? its posted in new tracks.
thanks facehead |
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FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 02:20
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by the way what did you make this with??? |
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squ1d
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 02:25
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Cubase SX3 =) Thanks for the review man!! Ill work on those issues!!!!! Ill release a new mix later tonight if im able to make it!
ps: it sounds a little bit rough because i started and finished the track today =)
oh, i cant find your tracks man =(((((((((((( ill dig deeper and review them for u =) |
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FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 02:31
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thanks i posted my link and will keep my eyes open for you next post |
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squ1d
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 04:26
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Check it out! =) Bass now is better i think =) hearable! added some fx around, but not much!
Changed some stuff also in the arrangement, but most will go you wont hear/think is different. just some minor adjustments..
Fixed some of the tempo mistakes =)
Expecting your feedback everyone =) Last time ill touch this tune, will start another tomorrow/day after. Got some crazy ideas!
thx..
(did not uploaded to rapidshare)
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=656864&T=9875 |
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FaceHead
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 05:02
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ya it sounds better |
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 05:04
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still timing probs in your hats |
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Fat Data
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 17:15
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squ1d
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 18:51
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What do u mean by timing issues in the hh? =(
I see 2 crashes that shouldnt be there. But most timing issues are corrected in the latest mix (the one in acidplanet)
Oh, and which are the production issues orange? could u elaborate this for me so i can work it out in my next tune? Thx for the feedback =)
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Fat Data
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 19:04
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production issues mean that your sounds are overlaping each other(lotsof eq is needed) your kick is to woody your bass is very difficult tou hear and to deep to groove
after the middle of the track the synths that come in are way to loud and way to dry (more fx is needed)
but the most serius off them all is that all the track sounds out off time meaning the sounds are not placed-quantized correctly to fit with your kick and bass
but i say i more time youve got potential the only thing you need is lots of studio practice something to smoke and some gallons of coffee to keep you awake
(and some good monitors if you dont have allready)
thats about all i have to say
dont think my reply sais to you to quit or something like that not even close i mean exactly what you read PRACTICE!!
and im sure you will find the way!
orange
 http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
http://soundcloud.com/kymamusic |
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squ1d
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Posted : Oct 21, 2005 19:38
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Wow. Thanks for the fast answer! =)
I have to buy my monitors =( im producing with headphones, which sux! Ill buy them in the beginning of november!
Thx man, we'll talk later on my next track =) I got some crazy ideas popping, and when i get home ill put them down and maybe take a little more time to make my tunes/mixes. Plus, this is my 4th try at cubase. And 5th overall. So im just starting...
(i made all this track in a day, about 14hours working on it lol)
Thx for the feedback man! Ill try my best next time =) |
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