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Darkaholic_-_Born KiLLer (Promo Track)
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Umbra
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 26, 2006 09:09
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Space_Shuttle
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Posted : Aug 26, 2006 12:34
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Hi mate 
Well 1st of all u realy have to eq this synth at 0:56 
The bass is very good, i realy like the bass... 6:23 i like that scream very good and great madness synths
Keep twisting man 
Hug
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Paralyze
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Posted : Aug 26, 2006 13:27
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Fuckin sick man!! U drove me mad with this one! Keep a good work!!
Liked the ''Symphony'' part on 5:40!
Good luck ! |
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Xikwri Neyrra
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Posted : Aug 26, 2006 22:05
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HEEy!! Nice track maniako!!! keep the practice everyday!!! I just think u must quit some highs to the synths.!!! but everything is killer man!!! nice story... killer synths... excelent quality samples...... Viva el Mexican Pride Teejay BeeCee the 5th element rulessss!!!!!!!!!!
Xikwri Neyrra....From Outer Space!!!! Say No to piracy, eat fruitys and vegetables! |
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Umbra
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 26, 2006 22:14
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glad u guys like, i will keep in mind to eq high sytnhs 
 Gorump Peyya - \\\"Mystery of Nitzzy\\\"
VA - \\\"No Mercy for the Weak\\\"
eniChkin - \\\"A Particle of Infinity\\\"
VA - \\\"Ten Reasons to eat dust\\\" |
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palex
Palex
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Posted : Aug 27, 2006 03:15
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ehehh..cool crazy frog intro...like the bassline..congrats...but dont like kick..needs to be stronger,i think...agree with Space_Shuttle ,sinths need eq...man..that sinphony is out of time..try to put that in correct bpm...i would like to ear this track when its fixed..try man..im sure u can do it better!!
peace
keep music evil!! |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Aug 28, 2006 18:34
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Twisted true .. But dark ?
Make the kik harder .. Heard some nice ideas but
think u need in here some more envelope huging
sound and to work on the eq , in some parts all r
be coming dim when there is an burden of sound
but the way is good just clean them , Liket the all
wildness in the end . Overal cool track ! Didt liket
the all talking pads (Think there is to much ) but
this is a matter of taste for sure . Any way .. Keep
working you are in the right direction .. Cheers !
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Umbra
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 28, 2006 23:24
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cool.. i get it with the eq, i see i forgot to fix volume in one part thats all i think i messed up, sum like sum don't, i will keep in mind comments 4 future tracks..
1. thats just my kind of kick, i don't like kicks that blow ur eardrum.
2. i like samples
3. dark n twisted, samples might not be dark, but muzik can be..
u dont like.. not ur style
Gorump Peyya - \\\"Mystery of Nitzzy\\\"
VA - \\\"No Mercy for the Weak\\\"
eniChkin - \\\"A Particle of Infinity\\\"
VA - \\\"Ten Reasons to eat dust\\\" |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Aug 29, 2006 00:32
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Hey man ..
Peoples here wants to help y not to attack or upon
you , just listen to what they say and all will be 100
There is no in here "Some 1 like and some 1 dont" ,
Belive me .. All the ppls that are writing y in here r
liket your project but its always have what to fix &
what to learn . Try get the things the way they are .
So if i offer u somthing (Or palex writing y..) Belive
us that we know what we saying ... Im wrting here
for you .. Not for me , I know the work , So please
listen , Its for u , for your track and your making ur
music better . Some time outside ppls can hear that
differents . I like your work (Heard only one - This)
But i think you should put some more emphasis to
your sound quality .. Thats not mean that "Its not
my style" , Try fix those things and your music will
be great , Dont debate and argue .. Work ! .
1 . What is "Kind of kik" (Dont be closed & lockt) ,
There is millions kinds of kik . This kik of yours in
here dont fit so why not just to do somthing about
I can tell you that any kik and even the blower can
be sound good for this we have the eq machine or
/& Monster 04:Ins. 1 Wave C1 Comp - Gate And/
or many others . All are in your head and in yours
hands , You got the potential .. Do somthing with .
2. When (If u like ) using samples try taking Wav
3 . Samples dont make the track (And if yes .. Then
its the samples music and not yours . To be a Lego
man .. Well .. Not sure that its your dream . Open
Vst's and make it darker .
You say : (And im quoting) "u dont like.. not ur style"
But this is not true man ! Work and it will be ... !!! |
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Umbra
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 29, 2006 02:07
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jiberish, i accept opinions and comments, but no when to tell me what to do to make my muzik better... so keep ur big shot comments bro
thank u to space shuttle, paralyze, palex & my bro xikwry 4 listening and 4 their opinions..
peace n boom
(i got whut i needed)
bye bye
Gorump Peyya - \\\"Mystery of Nitzzy\\\"
VA - \\\"No Mercy for the Weak\\\"
eniChkin - \\\"A Particle of Infinity\\\"
VA - \\\"Ten Reasons to eat dust\\\" |
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Aug 29, 2006 02:41
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What i can say .. Do what u want
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Dai
IsraTrance Junior Member
Dai aka Amatti
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Posted : Aug 29, 2006 08:45
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Nice work, Umbra my friend!!
very very twisted...and I really liked how your bass note changes as the story goes....and love the sample at 5:32, and usage of voice samples are very cleaver. Keep up the good work! I really really enjoyed, thanks!
Tell me what you listen, and I'll tell you what you are.
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jaramogi
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Posted : Aug 29, 2006 13:23
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D-Alien
Oxidelic
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Posted : Aug 30, 2006 18:46
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listening to the trak,
in general its very nice one!!! but! i agree with the rest that u should work a bit more on the kik. dont change it or smthing just tweak a bit more the eq. why? u have this very nice bouncy bass u put. what makes it bouncy? its short notes nad its small nice mid-freqs click it has. but as i hear u dont use the 4 1/16 but just the 3 of them, than the first note of your bass is actually sustituted by the kik right? well just boos a bit the mid-freqs of your bit so it sounds similar to the ones on your bas! thus the bouncy, rolling feeling will be still better! cuz the listener will percieve all 4 1/16 in every 4beat bar, right? the sound game i like a lot ...what i'm missing is the percusion, snares, other percs.. but i asume you're still working on it.
and man.. really, dont argue, even if u dont agree dont argue, just listen to some samples of mr. cardinal's music (although it dont fit to your style) and listen to the quality, so when he is telling u something, its 4 good. and u dont know how ppl like him are helping us all here. cuz experience is the most valuable thing an artist can have, its not the hardware, the software.. Its The Experience!
Congrats Umbra
KEEEEEEP TWEEEEEKIIIINNGGGG, cuz we want MORE!!
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www.myspace.com/setanicmusic
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kin beat
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Aug 31, 2006 05:35
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Eric mi amigo!
I dig your track, honestly you are on the right path just follow your insticts and let it flow!
by the way take cardinals cartel comment as it is just a constructive criticism of your work, come on you know know how it is cabron!
keep working and you'll surprise yourself.
a ver cuando vienes a Guadalajara!...
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www.twitter.com/ckloro |
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