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Mini-Mal
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Posted : May 29, 2002 19:45
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iKomah
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Posted : May 29, 2002 19:55
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Nice intro! like the fx's 
though the strings have a little to much reverb pherhaps..
The bassline is veeeery nice 
can´t really hear what they are saying in the vocal sample, maybe bring it forth more with a compressor or something?
The beats are overall cool.. misa like this one..
I think some more work can be done but its allready a nice one! 
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Mini-Mal
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Posted : May 29, 2002 19:59
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the sample goes like this:
"There something out there... that... that wish in the cellar is only part of it... it lives... out in those woods... in the dark... something.... something that´s come back.. from the death!"
Thanx for the tips
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Kaz
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Posted : May 30, 2002 16:07
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Try raising the strings an octave, clean up the vocal (lower it's sub/lower bass frequencies as well). Great bassdrum entrance. About the percussion - make another copy of the snares and pass it through a resonator and then EQ it - should give you another element to improv on.
I'd also add a delay to the strings, and make their attack non-linear but rather curved exponentially (can't draw it, so I hope you'll understand what I said here).
Great music, but not living up to it's full (and great) potential. This could be a REAL monster of a track.
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Mini-Mal
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Posted : May 30, 2002 16:38
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Thanx for the good tips
I will work on them later.. i think i know what u mean with the strings..
Thanx!
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tom anteater
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Posted : May 31, 2002 18:47
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i liked this
where did you get the sample from?
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Mini-Mal
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Posted : May 31, 2002 22:27
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my brother gave it to me... dont know were he got it from, but i´ll ask him!
Thanx
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ZBISH
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Posted : Jun 2, 2002 18:36
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Hi dude.
great work u doing there.
keep on 
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Mike A
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Posted : Jun 2, 2002 18:56
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Here's some points for improvement:
The bass sounds a bit dirty, or bubbly.. Can't describe it really.
There is a part in your percussion which sounds like a.. umm.. Hitting a wood block and octave up.. It doesn't really fit in, try maybe to delay it and and lower it's volume.
Also try to copy the strings to a higher octave with lower volume, to give it a more "dramatic" feel.
Good luck!
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A.Rosengren
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Posted : Jun 2, 2002 19:45
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Good one my friend 
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GIGI
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Posted : Jun 2, 2002 20:31
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Simply GREAT !!
Man, you got some high potential in here, dont let it waste!!
Fine work on the beat, just try to acvhieve a more clear bass sound, follow some tips of the guys here suggested and give it the finish magical touch it needs, and you are on your way up.  keep it up!
TOO WIERD TO LIVE, WAY TO RARE TO DIE!
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Mini-Mal
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Posted : Jun 3, 2002 00:13
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Thanx mates
Im happy for all the great feedback!
And yeah there are some minor mistakes... i didnt put a lot of work in it!
But i´ll fix them
Thanx again!
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Sputer
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Posted : Jun 3, 2002 10:04
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Very Very Very Nice
Good work !
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Follow your heart, not the people around you"... |
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Xoltan
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Posted : Jun 4, 2002 03:14
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This track RULES! 8) |
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Vibe Tribe
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Posted : Jun 12, 2002 11:53
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wow.... very good mate
im realy imresed ))))))
but, there is always but!!!! ))) hehhee
i think you shuld raise the vol up .
botom line : K I L L E R~!~
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