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A progressive new track :D

Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah

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Posted : May 23, 2006 01:12
The name is : Motion

link : http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=7928DE775F1D6225
diskOtek
Entek

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Posted : May 23, 2006 02:23
hey sound surgeon!
there might be some problem with the link for i cant download.

check it!
Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah

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Posted : May 23, 2006 08:58
Works fine man
Minimal Monster
Minimal Monster

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Posted : May 23, 2006 09:03
really cool proggy tune man! u sure know how to make it groovy
i think the bassline needs to be more fat, abit more subby to give it a full-proggy-feeling..
really loved the drums part in the middle!
keep doing good thing mish
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah

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Posted : May 24, 2006 06:23
Thanks Raja!

Misha
LoGicaL


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Posted : May 24, 2006 17:50
Very good proggy sound, nice sounds and a very good stop at 3:00. Good Work, keep it. http://forum.isratrance.com/viewtopic.php/topic/88630/forum/26 . Try and this
orange
Fat Data

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Posted : May 24, 2006 19:23
nice 1!

bass and kick needs fattening up they are a bit weak!

i also think that this track would be more groovie with a different bassline the monotonic style of the bass makes it kinda boring/uninteresting(but this is my opinion)

after the breakdown not much interesting things come and the track looses the nice flow it had in the first part!

more rythmic percussion also would be nice!

the track starts very nice but looses its way after the break! try to keep the electro feeling and soundz and make it more interesting after the break!

mixing also needs improvement!

overall its a nice track with a weird atmosphere!
good job!!

keep blasting

orange
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diskOtek
Entek

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Posted : May 25, 2006 01:52
ok!
managed to download!

great track!
really like that u keep going up in every new one!

nice bassline and percussion!

only thing is to try keep the same dancy atmosphere after the break cause it looses much energy from there on!

keep it up and see u!

Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah

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Posted : May 25, 2006 19:34
Logical: Thank you for listening

Akis : your replies are one of the best I get, since I know my weak points after i read them. THANKS! I will add some more work nowdays since I have a bit more spare time from work.

Discotek: the atmosphere changed since i tried to make it more chilly after that break, it seems like a bad shot i think.. 10x!

thanks to all buds

Misha
full_on
IsraTrance Team

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Posted : May 26, 2006 07:01
The track starts nice, but the production is not good. I think you need to make a better mix (things does not sound good, sounds like very old tracks in terms of production, which is bad).

You have good ideas, but they are not sounding good. Maybe you need better equipment.

Keep going!
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah

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Posted : May 27, 2006 10:48
Full_on : Production indeed is not the best of mine, im working on it nowdays and it will be improved.

For sure I need better equipment

thanks for repling man

Misha
ND
ProSect

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Posted : May 27, 2006 21:56
Ok, so the sound kinda dry and feels empty. Kick and bass should be improved. The second part of the track feels like some transition between songs or something.

Work it out, not bad, but we will wait for better!

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AbsolutZero(D.V.M.)
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Posted : May 28, 2006 00:54
Very nice track bro
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Sound Surgeon
Crater / Mish-kah

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Posted : May 28, 2006 13:01
Thanks ND and AbsolutZero!
Nomolos(Zenon Rec.)
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : May 28, 2006 19:55
hey Mish

ok so first i must agree about the kick,right now its punch only! imo some subs would be good.

i think that esp' in prog' where the speed doesnt play the main roll groove must have a heaviear amphasis and so i agree with Akis(Orange) some more perc' lines will be great!

other then that i like the vibe it has and i like the long break! mystery is allways welcome in my book

i think that if u implemeant some 1/16 hh lines after the break it will carry your track and will give it the needed power and drive.

over all sounds good!

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