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You´re ATTENTION please!!!!

simius m


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Posted : Jul 1, 2004 02:48
Hi ppl:

It is very important that you give me feedback of this one every thing is important, good things and bad one´s. The only way to improve in music making is learning from everybody. So all the opinions will be very helpful. Please post something. Here it is.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/2xamusic.htm

This track is not mine it is from a very promising Mexican Duo. Or what´s your opinion?

Thank´s to all.           2 MINUTE CLIMAX TRANCE!!!
OIL
Oil

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Posted : Jul 1, 2004 04:26
Cool intro man!!
john k.


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Posted : Jul 2, 2004 07:25
i like that trashy trance thing

peace!!!
john k.


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Posted : Jul 2, 2004 07:26
i like that trashy trance thing

peace!!! it rocks even harder from 3:45
Nomolos(Zenon Rec.)
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Jul 2, 2004 19:20
ok....
the kick has too much reverb i think and sits 'back' in the mix...compress it and make it louder(many people have this prob)i would replace thoese open HH they make the track sound older.....
some very good FX and sounds...i like some breaks u have in the track(but some come back 2 many times) and over all there is a good story to the track...
the first thing i would do is take care of the Kick...no reverb or much less.
some paning and fade automations would be good and will give the track a lot of movment and breathing.
these are things i find my self many times telling people and allso with my own shit i see that it improoves the track A LOT!
over all good job!,cheers.
          "....or is it???"

www.zenonrecords.com
www.myspace.com/thenomolos
simius m


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Posted : Jul 2, 2004 19:53
Quote:

On 2004-07-02 19:20, djnomolos wrote:
ok....
the kick has too much reverb i think and sits 'back' in the mix...compress it and make it louder(many people have this prob)i would replace thoese open HH they make the track sound older.....
some very good FX and sounds...i like some breaks u have in the track(but some come back 2 many times) and over all there is a good story to the track...
the first thing i would do is take care of the Kick...no reverb or much less.
some paning and fade automations would be good and will give the track a lot of movment and breathing.
these are things i find my self many times telling people and allso with my own shit i see that it improoves the track A LOT!
over all good job!,cheers.




Thank you man that´s exactly the kind of feedback i am looking for. I will follow those advices and see what happens. Thank´s           2 MINUTE CLIMAX TRANCE!!!
simius m


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Posted : Jul 4, 2004 10:23
Due to the minimum answers i´ve got here, i want to think it is because:

1.- You are to lazy to go to soundclick page.
2.- You go to sounclick page but you are not a member so you are not allowed to download, and you are to lazy to register.

So like your opinion is important to me because this artists are a mexican promise and the track is almost a killer, i will make things easier to you. Open this link in a new window and download will start automatically.

Just click here.

http://s2.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=24DAFA53720CDFE83A3611415B52BED7

That´s all i can do, if i continue without getting any answer i will resign.           2 MINUTE CLIMAX TRANCE!!!
Nomolos(Zenon Rec.)
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Jul 4, 2004 13:38
"get up stand.....DONT GIVE UP THE FIGHT"
good on ya mate...common people give some feedbacks!
cheers.           "....or is it???"

www.zenonrecords.com
www.myspace.com/thenomolos
john k.


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Posted : Jul 6, 2004 00:56
any sound engineers out there to give it a shot??

i think there is plenty of in this forum i really hope someone will take a look at it
dj nomolos thanx for ur opinion we applied that reverb to the final mix 'cause we had an opportunity for some friend to play it in his dj set so we just like tried to make the best out of the mix and stuff it in a cd as fast as we could... (we suck at mastering) and u r right the reverb is indeed too much.
what exactly do you mean when u say that the kick sits "back" on the mix? any crucial tips on mixing? i think it's just a matter of practicing hehe

anyways i would really like to hear someone else's opinion on this track

thanx everyone in advance
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2 minute TWISTED trance
Nomolos(Zenon Rec.)
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posts :  2027
Posted : Jul 6, 2004 01:00
well with what i heard i think the kick does not have enough sugnificance because it is not compressed well enough and is not loud enough...there for it sits back.....and the fx sit forward!
cheers.
          "....or is it???"

www.zenonrecords.com
www.myspace.com/thenomolos
Top-down
Inactive User

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Posted : Jul 8, 2004 03:48
Agree with djnomolos, the levels have to be ajusted, I think the lead is to loud and I can understand why - it is sweet, I allmost started chewing it while listening. And there are some great modulations on it, but again it is to loud.

The chord changes are good,feels like some rocksong.

The track is very energetic and yes it sounds a bit retro (might be those hihats,but I am not sure).

P.S. Nomolus is right about the kick - it should be stronger in this type of music.
orange
Fat Data

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Posts :  3918
Posted : Jul 13, 2004 00:18
yep the kick needs more power for shure
and its sounds retro and thats not bad..
the levels could be better adjusted
the lead is perfect but is dominating the mix to much

i realy liked the energy that it gives its danceble for shure
work on the production more
good job not my style but good job!!

orange           http://www.landmark-recordings.com/
http://soundcloud.com/kymamusic
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