jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 11, 2014 22:48:41
hey yo guys here's a work i posted sometime back.. i worked on it and sorta finished it.. not really convinced about the end part.. and also i have to fix some small mistakes.. otherwise i think its done.. chk it.. i like the melodies in this one.
if while listening or after got any words.. it be cool to lay it here..
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Midnight Sun
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Posted : Apr 12, 2014 02:35
Loving the flow, nice organic sounds.
Great basslines! Liked very much how you make changes.
Maybe sound @3:50 is too loud.
I just felt a bit static at the final section, could be because of the style I'm not used to.
Very nice work overall.
jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 12, 2014 10:29
hey man thnx! good u like the flow.. cause here i wanted to make it flow without much complete breakdowns.. and about final section i felt it too.. hmm so lets see will do something there.. cheers
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 15, 2014 18:05
Hey dude.
Kick sounds abit lost in the mix, sounds bit low also.
You could work bit more on base too.
Spacey sounds.
2.10 is cool. Bit reverb on that minimal melody would be nice.
2.34 very fast transition but kind of cool. totaly different path
3.45 cool and different.
As always with your tracks i would want some which marks the progression in a more obvious way(but thats just my personal taste).
6.46 is bit strange development
Bipolar
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 11:39
Cool man! really nice psychedelic track, is really I guess like Midnight said organic! Really forest, mushroom type of music! really cooL! Mushroomtrance!
jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 13:04
hello guys thnx for the words.. i try to explore new directions..
@grevinsky .. man i seriously gotta work on my studio.. current room i use tricks me a lot.. so i kind of figured that its not worth crying over my mix right now.. yes.. i agree with ur points.. lot of mud.. and about transitions i want to add more risers and the opposites.. but i forget it when i work.. will write it down next time.. for this one here.. i will try sm more eqing and see.. cheers all
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