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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Nov 3, 2011 03:37:08
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Galaxy Machine
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Nov 3, 2011 03:49
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Awesome Stuff Man! 
At 2.40 around, parts get a bit too funky maybe?
At 3:30 stomp! I like how the speed takes up the pace
At 4:30 around it really kicks!
Just a thought at the break at 6:00 maybe add a transformer robotic voice sample which crys "Freedom!!!!!!!"?
At 7:50 around a bit repetitive, maybe volume/filter play here
At 9:00 maybe some traffic sound or robotic sing-sang
At 9:40 around maybe some guitare riff?
What Vst you use for the female transfomer voice?
Reminds me a bit of Ital sound
 
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Nov 3, 2011 04:18
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Finally a decent review! Very good tips man, actually the previous edit of this track had a guitar riff in that finall section but then I changed my mind, maybe I need to work out a better riff there. IŽll totally look into them for the next edit tonight!
I really appreciate your time for helping me to improve!
Oh and I used FL pitcher for the female sample and some modulation aswell
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