Oni Katsu
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Posted : Mar 21, 2010 22:42:50
Hi guys, i need some rating, and maby some advise
so far, i have built the song up to the first climax of the song
but i'm thnking about how i should build up to the final climax, and how many synths, is there a tutorial somewhere telling how long parts of the song should last, or is that really up to me?
Anyways, please rate it at least
Oni Katsu
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Posted : Mar 23, 2010 05:35
Anyone? :/
TimeTraveller
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Posted : Mar 23, 2010 14:29
nice vibes I like it ,the only thing is it's not loud enough.But too loud would be worse imo.Even though the track waveform looks very healthy,push the right faders a bit up & occasionaly deal with eq and maybe compressor.Keep on experimenting.
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Oni Katsu
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Posted : Mar 23, 2010 17:15
Well thank you ^^
Yeah, i think the track actually isnt any loud, every track starts with this little mixing combinator, where there is a compressor, and a maximizer, i think they might stop the sound from getting louder, i'll do something about it.
I also changed around on the basslines, the one thats just straight-on making it sound like its building up to something got changed with the one having variations in the bassline, just not notes. (higher, lower etc) it turned out pretty well
also, i tried out EQ'ing the kick, and i made the volume extremely loud, giving it this pumping effect, it sounded kind of fun, but gets tired of it in a while so.. i dont know if i shall use it. anyways, thank you
Oni Katsu
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Posted : Mar 30, 2010 21:59
Any.. others? that..
feel like telling me.. how to make it.. better? >/
vipal
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Posted : Apr 3, 2010 00:56
to me it sounds like the bass is not having a lot of mids, almost like there is a high-cut placed too low.
some more reverb on some lead sonds would be good also. nice full-on track if you can fix some things.
Oni Katsu
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Posted : Apr 3, 2010 13:07
Hmm.. itd nice that people can put words on things, there is a little something about the bass.
so you think there is a jigh cut thats placed too low?
i added a distorter to it to make it bassy, and i EQ'ed it.
in the distorter there is something that makes it a little less bassy, and the.., EQ might be a little wrong..
i'm gonna see what i can do about it. Thanks
Also, i'll see if i can add some reverb to the leads, i'm not sure if i can automate stuff to bypass or what x)
