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Work in Progress - bone breaker 160 bpm
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ZenMind
ZenMind
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Posted : Jul 22, 2012 00:51:09
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ZenMind
ZenMind
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Posted : Jul 23, 2012 20:52
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The synth with the distortion needs a lot of work but i guess it gives a good drive, im still messing with it and arranging the notes, it wont be as repetitive and linear as in this demo, dont know but it bugs the shit out of me having too much repetition in a track. I guess a good balance between tech noises and musicality works best in terms of power/ trip/ story.
But ok, this is a workshop forum so start working you shoppers and post some of your knowledge and opinions, finished tracks are harder to change so raw and in progress is how its supposed to be 
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ZenMind
ZenMind
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Posted : Jul 29, 2012 19:42
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Jul 30, 2012 02:50
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i like the intro atmosphere!, i think the kick comes in terribly, like extremely randomly, first synth @1:25 its killer! i feel the drive a bit too forced, maybe let it flow more imo.
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ZenMind
ZenMind
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Posted : Aug 1, 2012 01:34
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Thanks for the comment 
Im on the process of changing the randomness of things on the track, my way of building a structure is like drawing a sketch, lay down the rude ideas, check if they sound good or could work together with this and that. After sounds and fxs are chosen i deconstruct and rearrange things to build the final track, most of the time only a few things survive from the original idea hehe! The drive is forced indeed mostly coz i stretched a few loops to make the demo a little bigger from 2.20 on is just repetition with a synth added ill work on that!
Cheers!
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nihil000
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Posted : Aug 9, 2012 14:35
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nice bass sound |
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Prakul
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Posted : Aug 16, 2012 21:54
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Love the synth @ 1:25! |
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smoker
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Aug 16, 2012 22:59
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well done man really nice
that true what Midnigth tell you
fix the rendom kick and it be more amazing
but still i love it |
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Melange5738
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Aug 17, 2012 02:11
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Just listend through my latop speakers so do not take anything I say too seriously, but the second part was much better than the first part. I got the impression that the first part was too fast and the second part just right or even too slow.
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