jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 10, 2011 23:28:29
yo folks, been working on this for sometime now... any feedback would be nice.. peace
also, at around 1.45 the bass goes bonkers for about two sec or something... could you prolly tell whats causing it?
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 01:04
kick is very round no? bass is a bit dead...
but u got grooove...
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 06:52
what u mean round? bass i gotta mix properly still... this is headphone mix...
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 06:13
ok, i've worked more on perc.. gotta work more on mid range sounds.. also this feels empty.. plz give feedback on what sounds can be tried
peace
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 14:54
Haven't heard it yet, but if you have so many stuff to change in your tune, you should change it and post it back here when you have major improvements.
Need to mix up the bass? Go ahead, cut the lowest frequencies that can't be heard, cut the highest freqs. too, so they don't interfere with leads or other sounds.
And you would be suprised if you knew your headphones inside out, if you know how the behave, guess what, you can "almost" mix your tune properly.
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I think the bass should grind more, that or you need some sort of bass lead maybe to fill in the middle to bottom end.
This could also be cured by opening the freq of the bassline's cut-off up a little as well, to fill out the lower end.
Overall I really like the flow and low tech darkness.
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 19:49
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On 2011-04-16 14:54, NychroLogic wrote:
Haven't heard it yet, but if you have so many stuff to change in your tune, you should change it and post it back here when you have major improvements.
Need to mix up the bass? Go ahead, cut the lowest frequencies that can't be heard, cut the highest freqs. too, so they don't interfere with leads or other sounds.
i think there's a reason this place is called the workshop.. i thought maybe you can post stuff u working on the fly and ppl can listen and if they want can tell you few things to work on and stuff like that.. or maybe im wrong.. but i dont give a shit.. not anymore peace
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 19:51
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On 2011-04-16 18:54, psycocis_generator wrote:
I think the bass should grind more, that or you need some sort of bass lead maybe to fill in the middle to bottom end.
This could also be cured by opening the freq of the bassline's cut-off up a little as well, to fill out the lower end.
ok.. will check this out.. peace
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psyraal
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 20:15
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On 2011-04-16 19:49, jeeboomba wrote:
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On 2011-04-16 14:54, NychroLogic wrote:
Haven't heard it yet, but if you have so many stuff to change in your tune, you should change it and post it back here when you have major improvements.
Need to mix up the bass? Go ahead, cut the lowest frequencies that can't be heard, cut the highest freqs. too, so they don't interfere with leads or other sounds.
i think there's a reason this place is called the workshop.. i thought maybe you can post stuff u working on the fly and ppl can listen and if they want can tell you few things to work on and stuff like that.. or maybe im wrong.. but i dont give a shit.. not anymore peace
You missunderstood me, there are reasons why the workshop is filled with 'upgrades' and less filled with ppl to help out, you shouldn't make a sound, and then upload it again after some minor changes, you should re-upload when you have some MORE work done or at least when errors are fixed.
Don't try to cause drama, if you say you don't give a damn anymore.. well you should give a damn. Peace https://soundcloud.com/neervos
jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 16, 2011 20:39
no drama trying to be caused... i get your point though.. but i think work some more and also fixed the pointed errors before i posted the update..
anyways, will work much more in future before i put it here.. peace
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Apr 17, 2011 19:26
wooooh.... drama xD
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Posted : Apr 18, 2011 01:08
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wooooh.... drama xD
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Posted : Apr 18, 2011 20:56
keep working !! its comming along nicely ! work on your kick,, when u have a good kick, it will make the rest of the elements also come out more, same goes for ur bass,, ur perc work is decent, with some nice flowz, but its stagnent, work it more , add more layers in there, what they trying to say is,, keep working !
bomz
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