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WolfBlood - WlaBs (Dark Fullon Demo)
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warlock
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Posted : Oct 4, 2011 17:53:17
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Hey guys... wanted to share and get some feedback on something ive been working on... Feel free to say what you like, even if you hate it with all ur guts haha...
Maybe some tips on the mix, what more sounds could be added..etc etc
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warlock
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Posted : Oct 4, 2011 17:54
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.... oooppppss
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warlock
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Posted : Oct 4, 2011 17:55
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Karma Konnect
Karma Konnect
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Posted : Oct 4, 2011 19:08
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Hey . its a decent track mate .. Good Ideas and sounds(which is very important) .. Mix can be definitely better .. though i heard it on the hphones .. sounds ok .. percs can hve more weight .. and u can try removing sme freqss from the leadsss
Keep up the good work !!
  Look Around You - EP Out Now on (Planet Ben records)
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warlock
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Posted : Oct 5, 2011 07:17
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the five assed monkey
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Posted : Oct 6, 2011 01:45
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very good! I'm not a big fan of this style but i really enjoyd your track i read your post in the production section and i think when u making such interesting tracks its worth the time u spent.. keep it up! |
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Oct 6, 2011 20:08
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very nice flow of sounds... open hats are really delicious! killer leads also... wht do you use to make those patterns or gating like groove? midi?
first half my fav.. later i feel you got lazy? good stuff mate.. keep it up
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faxinadu
Faxi Nadu / Elmooht
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Posted : Oct 7, 2011 03:09
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woaaah surprise here, good stuff!! reminds a bit of 3 point turn - placebo, the way the vocs are cut, good stuff.
i am listening on very bad speakers, but your sound seems good as well.
+1 on the comments that it has a good flow.
 
The Way Back
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WhySoLazy?
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Posted : Oct 7, 2011 11:19
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Really enjoyed your track
What vst you use to make this bassline ? |
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warlock
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Posted : Oct 7, 2011 14:25
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glad to see tht a lot of ull liked it... thx a lot guys
@jeeboomba ... are u referring to the patterns or gating like groove on the lead?
@WhySoLazy? ... Sylenth>>>Moog Bass preset
Incase ull guys are interested in listening to some of my older incomplete tracks, ive mentioned the link below I have stopped producing under tht name, and have scrapped all ideas of tht project since i have gotten out of a certain phase in my life...
www.soundcloud.com/wicked-labs
Also i have never ever had my tracks mastered and always wondered wht they would sound like with some mastering... if there anybody tht would like to master one of my tracks jus to gimme a taste of this feeling, i would honestly appreciate it a lot let me know
thx again guys..
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Oct 7, 2011 18:37
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the groove on the leads.. those twists and turns
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dharmatronic
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Posted : Oct 7, 2011 21:21
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you could apply some deep eq in the general mix; not sure if you eqlized track by track. i heard many freq cancellation and sometimes it almost stopped the kick's tail or changed the kick's tune. also noticed huge amp/volume variation during loops.
definitely nice flow!
  always learning...
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warlock
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Posted : Oct 8, 2011 08:48
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dharmatronic
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Posted : Oct 9, 2011 12:59
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hey mate, listen when the kick breaks in (26 secs). I would say there is a colision between close hh/snare and kick which cancels some of kick's freq. in the whole track I could heard the kick hitting "crispy" in the mix. I may be wrong but you can use a freq analyser to check that.
also listen to loop 3'19'', I noticed amp variation over there.
hope it helped.
=)
  always learning...
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Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Oct 9, 2011 15:30
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On 2011-10-04 19:08, Karma Konnect wrote:
Mix can be definitely better
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Cool style , And you have an realy good ideas .
More hh loops changes need . Theres somthing strange (for me) At the Baseline point , Like hear stable bass (More firm and sharp and less dim and spread as here) , (When tastes can be different for sure) - Try make the bass more short so you will find more air between bass & Kik - Then bring more bass machine as Xbass 4000 and those to bring all be open again .
Realy remind me the french psytrance - In few areas (Here and there) .
You should work hard on your global sound with an more attention (To each sound and sound) To bring all be sound (Together) More clean and bright .
Keep the good work .. !
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