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Psydust
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Posted : Apr 26, 2012 09:38:14
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 26, 2012 14:06
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the base isent that fat, i think you could enhance it abit in the lower freq´s. You could give the kick more meat aswell.
you could fatten up the snare also.
Try panning ure percussions a little bit too the sides, it doesent have too be much, but it give more stereo feel to it.
It give alot more depth if you work around more with the stereofield, now there is no stereo feeling at all.
Personally this is not my cup of tee.
Production wise, you could work more on the mix. You got a good progression tho.
I think the break at 3.50 to 6 is way too long. If you want to keep it that long id say u work with something more to add.
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Equilizyme
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Posted : Apr 27, 2012 01:28
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i agree wih Grevinsky - i think your bass needs more bad assery. imo if you just turn the octave knowb on your synth to one octave lower you will help it a ton.
I also think you could improve this by having more synths. basically I hear the same style of synth and really similar notes throughout.
you have a good vibe and good progression i agree, but I think with the ideas you have posted here you could condense them to like 3 minutes of interesting material.
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