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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Apr 28, 2011 18:55:14
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greenball
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Posted : Apr 28, 2011 19:37
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Like your style, warp speed Mr Twitchsack , u need to improve your mix, i'm no expert but i'm working hard in trying to improve my skills also. It was hard for me to undestand but your kick and bass should be mono and center, that's one of the things that got me understanding a little bit more where sounds should be placed.
Hope it helped and welcome to Isratrance |
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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Apr 28, 2011 20:12
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Apr 28, 2011 21:02
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ok at first i thought the kick bass was too low being overpowered by the pads but then it got better...very intricate..everythings flying from all directions...i like the melodic break at 2:10 but then u dont continue..wats the deal?
good trippy track
 www.soundcloud.com/kabbalisticvillage
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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : Apr 28, 2011 21:52
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On 2011-04-28 21:02, kabbalisticvillage wrote:
i like the melodic break at 2:10 but then u dont continue..wats the deal?
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That was something i was thinking about =) thanks mate. At first i thought that melodie didn't fit the track so i just used it there as a break, i like it so i might re arrange it then and use it for a bit more 
cheers!
For Contact & Bookings:
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New Album Out: Wizack Twizack - IV (Ovnimoon Records 2011) http://www.beatport.com/#release/wizack-twizack-iv/387698 |
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Taii
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Posted : Apr 28, 2011 22:07
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LOL @ greenball, 10\10
Track sounds like pure awesomeness
Favourite part starts at 3:20, that sound, 
Maybe there could be something like that in the last part(s)? 
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Apr 29, 2011 01:23
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@3.32 awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
gogogogogo!
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Nectarios
Martian Arts
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Posted : Apr 29, 2011 03:45
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Not commenting on the music side of things, but you've high-passed the bottom end too high and/or you've chosen a kick and bass combo that has too little bottom end.
The mix needs more work as some sounds are out of control.
Peace out.
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Farbo
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Posted : Apr 29, 2011 05:15
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Wow Tommy! great work, really. Congratulations!
Commenting on the music side of things - I think it really bumps you up into intricate places, really dig the dark atmosphere, and there's always some sparks of mysterious shiny melodies... The end sounds a bit wacky to me, only the last lead I didn't liked but overall it's damn killer.
On the technical side of things - sounds very good to me, but maybe polishing some sounds as Disco Hooligans say would leave it more sharpy
Keep it up!
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vipal
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Posted : Apr 29, 2011 05:48
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On 2011-04-28 19:37, greenball wrote:
Like your style, warp speed Mr Twitchsack , u need to improve your mix, i'm no expert but i'm working hard in trying to improve my skills also. It was hard for me to undestand but your kick and bass should be mono and center, that's one of the things that got me understanding a little bit more where sounds should be placed.
Hope it helped and welcome to Isratrance
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hey admins, we need to kick out someone. this guy is just randomly copying replies of others all over this place. ban greenball por favor |
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greenball
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Posted : Apr 29, 2011 13:59
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oh snap |
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Supa Tu Zill
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Posted : Apr 29, 2011 17:16
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On 2011-04-29 05:48, vipal wrote:
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On 2011-04-28 19:37, greenball wrote:
Like your style, warp speed Mr Twitchsack , u need to improve your mix, i'm no expert but i'm working hard in trying to improve my skills also. It was hard for me to undestand but your kick and bass should be mono and center, that's one of the things that got me understanding a little bit more where sounds should be placed.
Hope it helped and welcome to Isratrance
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hey admins, we need to kick out someone. this guy is just randomly copying replies of others all over this place. ban greenball por favor
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I kinda liked this troll, something ironical... 
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terribly good funky song, basskick gives me so vibrant, energic mood. I don't think it needs lower freqs, maybe little less presence but still maintaining the absolutely amazing clarity |
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Koozer Mox
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Posted : Apr 30, 2011 21:55
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knocz
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Posted : May 1, 2011 19:31
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Production wise, you know what you're doing, so there's not much I can say to improve it.
One little thing: what hapeened between 4:51 and 4:52? It seems like you have a double kick and a double bass note conflicting with each other..
Concept wise, it seem's like the sounds, ideas, and arrangement are too abstract, which gives it that "hallucinogenic" feeling, but this also makes it seem like it's not going anywhere.. I don't know if this is what you want, but it's not like all the other stuff I've heard from you.
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Wizack Twizack
Wizack Twizack
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Posted : May 1, 2011 20:33
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On 2011-05-01 19:31, knocz wrote:
One little thing: what hapeened between 4:51 and 4:52? It seems like you have a double kick and a double bass note conflicting with each other..
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Yes, the double kick's velocity are lower so its not that serious conflict i think =)
i think soundcloud are messing with the sounds quality alot in some parts of the tracks i hear there.
cheers mate!
btw, i've done a final version of this track with some fixes and changes, and it will be released soon on a EP on SubSystemRecords based in Ireland.
bOm..
For Contact & Bookings:
Wizack_Booking@hotmail.com
www.soundcloud.com/wizack_Twizack
New Album Out: Wizack Twizack - IV (Ovnimoon Records 2011) http://www.beatport.com/#release/wizack-twizack-iv/387698 |
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