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With The Ocean On Their Shoulders (146bpm Forest Psy)
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Krskglstmpf
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 13:14:01
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jeeboomba
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 13:34
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hi there! i like ur sound pallet in relation to the theme you want to achieve... the overall feeling does remind the listner of the ocean..
@3.57 , whn u go higher with the bass.. there is a lack of drive because its only the bass that kiks off.. maybe try some perc there? or a some layer cause it sounds empty there..
nice hat work, atmos and reverb work is good.. 5.43 bring in a leading sound man.. even here sounding a bit empty..
7.27 i like the sounds.. cool.. starry ocean scene..
according to me.. u can try more leads.. it can help you connect the parts too.. u have spacy sound.. no mix comments from me cause on sad earphones..
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Grevinsky
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 14:19
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Hey dude.
The kick and bass dont have so good connection togheter. You could get em to sit better.
I think its bit to empty in the begining. When you have nothing else going on the pad seems bit low in volume.
Agree with jeebomba about more leads.
The snare is kind of low.
U have a ground but it seems all togheter kind of empty.
Build abit more on it and you have something great 
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Krskglstmpf
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Posted : Apr 24, 2014 22:32
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Hey there!
First, thanks for the feedback, I'll see and try what I can do to make the whole thing sound more... well, whole.
About the Intro:
The long slope is kind of intentional.
I want to use the track as an Intro for an conceptual release with the theme "oceans and underwater".
With the intro, i want to imagine a slow descent under the surface of the sea or something like that.
About the kick/bass connection:
I think i can see your point, maybe the kick should get a little more presence, I'll see to that first.
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