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namarrkon
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Posted : Dec 28, 2011 20:49:43
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hey groovers and shakers!
I've been writing tunes for a little while now, and I would love to share them with you all and get some constructive criticism...likes, dislikes, elements you would fix etc.
anyway this the link:
www.soundcloud.com/namarrkon
cheers ^_^ |
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Chemistry
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Posted : Dec 28, 2011 22:38
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So I had a listen and good job. my only thorn is that there is no element of surprise. I know what is to come (Sound wise) You can leave the structure I don't care about that, it's that kinda song and that's cool. You deliver and you got a good thing going but I would say use different sounds or change the ones you have so they don't sound like that overall. like you made it to the point of sounding like your influences and that's great if that's what you were going for now make it sound not like them.
if you are going for a straight how it's suppose to sound then you've got it and midday outdoors people will dig it  |
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ierofante
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 11:17
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If you would include links to a song or two directly in your post, you would get more listen by people who is lazy (like me).
 Fire Walk With Me |
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Chemistry
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Posted : Dec 29, 2011 22:44
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@ierofante He has 5 tracks on his soundcloud I say give them all many listens
@namarrkon ierofante is right.
I wasn't sure if this was just a promo or were you really looking for feedback.
I hope you understand what I'm saying and not taking it in a negative way. It's just that if you are just starting to share your music with the world and are unsure where you stand then you are in a GREAT position to really do something interesting. What I mean is you make "how it's supposed to be music" and you do it right. If it were a class project you got the "A" cool but what the world,psyscene and I really need is the DIRTY "D"
I feel like if you were to take your songs and leave them all as is just make them sound like you created all the colors on your pallet to paint the painting and not just picked the colors that are supposed to (in the box) come together. you would have some fun and powerful music 
like let's say dark shogun that sound around 3:33 I think make that sound either out of some other instrument or tweak it in a way so it gives the same vibe just a new sound.
I feel like I'm listening to liquid soul 2008 when what I really want is Namarrkon 2028
think forward
I must say I am very impressed by the land down under and it's neighbor. you guys seem to have the "supposed to be" down on many levels/styles. it's like you all took the technical route. it makes me want to go their for the structure. I need to get away and chill and think and learn a new.
all with love back at you from sunny SoCal
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willsanquil
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Posted : Dec 30, 2011 00:19
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Dec 30, 2011 00:48
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Amazing, it's what i think, guys (me included) try for years and cant get this level, when Psytrance is done right, its done right, my head is filled and i'm loving the speed its hapenning 
PS: i sense some glitches when u exported, is it my pc or was it yours?  |
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ierofante
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Posted : Dec 30, 2011 21:21
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How long have you been making music?
Fire Walk With Me |
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namarrkon
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Posted : Jan 4, 2012 10:52
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namarrkon
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Posted : Jan 4, 2012 10:54
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@nomad moon- yeh man these are just soundcloud glitches, will upload mastered versions soon |
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Larrikin
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Posted : Jan 4, 2012 17:18
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Icetoon
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Posted : Jan 4, 2012 18:20
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Awesome tunes bro, keep up the good work |
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