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Galaxy Machine
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jul 13, 2012 04:58:19
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Galaxy Machine
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jul 15, 2012 08:01
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Just updated, tweaked the sounds further. Tempered with the bass... not sure though i check the mastering with bad headphones (because of my neighbors) 
The are a few isolated sounds which are maybe to loud...
 
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makus
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Posted : Jul 16, 2012 13:42
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sorry but this sounds really strange to my ear.
bass line is very weak and quite.
same percloop repeating for too long.
the melodies, pads, arpeggios and bass are out of tune with each other. sometimes i had a feeling that another track started playing in the background.
you need to make up the composition, as it is absent now. please concentrate on learning musical scales, not pasting lots of vocal samples from movies.
try avoiding using the same preset for 9 minutes.
sorry again, but i can't tell you anything positive right now. you have lots of work ahead, go on and eventually you will work it out.
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