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White Trees
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kabbalisticvillage
IsraTrance Senior Member
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Posted : Mar 27, 2011 15:43:24
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dreadieg
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 27, 2011 21:30
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kick is way to high, for me at least.
ideas are nice, breakdown at 5:28ish is fun, if a little half hearted.
overall B+
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Mansikka
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Posted : Mar 28, 2011 09:02
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Try to use dblue glitch sparingly and bit tweaked. It doesnt sound very good when people use it with original presets and with randomlike arranging (Im nitpicky when it comes to any sounds I could possibly recognise).
Some sounds are too loud, try to find balance between sounds.
You have good base, stay melodic with your tracks 
peace
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makus
Overdream
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Posted : Mar 28, 2011 12:11
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kick should be milder indeed. the bass pattern is boring. it is ok to repeat it several times, but it needs more change then. same to melodies - make them diverse. kick fills, use them. use filter on kick and bass. use more percussion.
i would also rearrange the track a bit, the second brake with vocal sample doesn't neccessary have to be there. you interrupt the flow and after a brake repeat almost same thing. i mean the change isnt that big to make such a long brake.
other than that it is ok. keep up the work and youll be fine.
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