Grevinsky
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Posted : Apr 17, 2014 14:32
Hey man.
Intro could be more minimalistic, building up towards the rhythm. Now you are kind of spoling it bit fast.
Dont like the sound of the base so much.
Otherwise well placed sounds.
Mix sounds like it disappears in some parts.
Well developed and progressed.
Snare could have little more low mid, atleast when the mix is pretty light like at 4.00
From 3.56 could be nice with something more developing.
6.00 you could get alot better drive if you mashed up the baseline abit. not just doing the K B to the end of eternity. Something new would be nice there since its the last part.
i would say the snare/clap is too strong in the first part. the rest is perfect.
somehow weird to hear the clap in the intro but i liked it - made it less predictable...
cheers
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Mahruna
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Posted : Apr 21, 2014 21:31
Hey thanks for your time guys !
jup the break in the middel is not the best hehe ..and good tip from vipal with switching it with the intro it would make more sense there.
and mixing is a part i should invest more time
