Slynth
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Posted : Mar 7, 2014 06:02:00
Hi everyone, one more time x)
Someone can give me some opinions about this simple 6 seconds?
Slynth
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Posted : Mar 7, 2014 06:53
New link:
naretir
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Posted : Mar 7, 2014 10:49
low end?!
Ohh yeah. fiddle and boom. Ableton addict :)
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icedice
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Posted : Mar 7, 2014 14:02
Your skills to post in the right section?!
jeeboomba
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Posted : Mar 7, 2014 14:23
+1 on low end.. also it is very hard to comment anything on a 7 sec clip.. u should try posting in 'the workshop' section.. but before u do, make at least 3-4 min of work.. This way people will be able to critique better.. not just about sound quality, but also about structure, drive, and how to make the track flow better, etc.. some very nice ears over at the workshop, so give it a shot... it has helped me a great deal, these last couple of years.
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knocz
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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 01:35
In the right section now
The lead that's rising takes too much time;
the build up is long, and doesn't bring in much impact. The drums actually define the track tempo, and can stop it in beat - use this to your advantage, first play teh drums and make them do what ever you'd like, making it build up and varying where possible - using different perc instruments, only having two arms and two legs - but he may be an alien with 4 arms, using velocity to make things come in, hard hits and making the cymbals stop instantly(no release) to immediately pause the time and just do it's thing.
Then, all the other instruments must respect the drums - RESPECT!, so if the drums decide to stop, all shall stop -- and you can be a good guy and do something with the silence like letting one sound or two stay playing, or something that isn't playing but will be reveald after the buildup can be introduced, tons of ideas and variations.
Then there's the beat. Unfortunately, it sounds way off because it's not in key with the lead, and, in this small context it clashes. However, key changes can definetly wok, but it there parts are directly related thatn they would sound a lot better in the same key - and why isn't the lead playing with the beat? It would be cool to hear it with a roombling rolling snake beat to support it and make the trip alive!
jizy
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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 06:25
your making me feel paranoid about putting to much bass on my bass.
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 07:47
I guess you just want opinions on your Kick/Bass..
Well they both need to be fixed.
Kick: Add presence with compression and small EQ.
Bass: The problem with your bass comes from your synth I guess. Try to lower Cutoff a bit, and also use tigther Decay. Then add EQ to HP/LP the whole thing and clean 250hz section. You know classic procedures.. and finaly compress.
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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 13:27
Slynth
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Posted : Mar 18, 2014 01:21
What you think now?
Midnight Sun
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Posted : Mar 18, 2014 08:20
Kick sounds much better, bass needs more compression IMO, also try lowering Decay /Sustain and check for mud @300 hz.
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