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what do you think about this song?
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ohm mind
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Posted : Feb 11, 2012 19:40:49
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Hey everybody, I post my first track on soundcloud here :
http://soundcloud.com/ohm-mind
I want to have your opinion about it ?
I try to make oldskool stuff, I hope you like that.
There is no equalization or mastering for now but I master this song in one month I think!
Thanks a lot for this forum! CYA |
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jsrobinson
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Posted : Feb 11, 2012 20:41
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Nice. Honestly enjoyed it. |
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Suloo
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Posted : Feb 11, 2012 21:52
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i think you should put it into the workshop section 
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ohm mind
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Posted : Feb 12, 2012 02:49
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yes sorry for wrong section , i put it on the workshop now  |
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ohm mind
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Posted : Feb 13, 2012 12:59
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thanks jsrobinson  |
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ohm mind
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Posted : Feb 15, 2012 19:59
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more than 100 people and just 2 comments, I up the page |
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Disciple
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Posted : Feb 16, 2012 15:39
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I really really like it, old but fresh. I like all the sounds, however I feel if I have comment that it needs more width and depth in places, maybe a low volume reverberated wide sound in a counter melody sometimes, also a little long. Great stuff though. |
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ohm mind
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Posted : Feb 21, 2012 17:59
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thx disciple for your reply:)
I must try your idea for improve my track with low volume reverberated, why not but it's for mastering;), I hope in the begin of march the track will be finish.
You say is a little long, i think is more epic and more oldskool to make a long track!
I have a lot of other track , I put them later, making goa take time:)
thanks for reply cya
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Disrupted
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Posted : Feb 21, 2012 18:02
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Yeah it does sounds old school and everything. Bass could sounds a lot more, that snare could have some more complex rythmic pattern.
Else its great to hear those old psy sounds.
My music http://soundcloud.com/disrupted |
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makus
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Posted : Feb 22, 2012 12:20
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not my cup of tea, so i will only comment on the production.
there is no bass. don't even try to convince me that you put bass sound there, you didnt
the track is very dry, there is no space. everything happens right between the speakers, i cant hear any deepness of the scene.
leads are pretty thin and plastic, in opposite of what they were in '96. especially that high pitch lead that plays thru all of the track without modulation and changes... the leads need more life, bring modulation, put lfo everywhere u can.
mix-wise, i want more punch and air. also i think u need to cut the track to 7-8 mins but make it more interesting and diverse.
i think you have the ear, but the production skills need more training.
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ohm mind
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Posted : Feb 22, 2012 14:36
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On 2012-02-21 18:02, Disrupted wrote:
Yeah it does sounds old school and everything. Bass could sounds a lot more, that snare could have some more complex rythmic pattern.
Else its great to hear those old psy sounds.
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thanks disrupted, yes i must put some other snare pattern and improve the bass:) thanks for the reply man |
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ohm mind
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Posted : Feb 22, 2012 14:47
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On 2012-02-22 12:20, makus wrote:
not my cup of tea, so i will only comment on the production.
there is no bass. don't even try to convince me that you put bass sound there, you didnt
the track is very dry, there is no space. everything happens right between the speakers, i cant hear any deepness of the scene.
leads are pretty thin and plastic, in opposite of what they were in '96. especially that high pitch lead that plays thru all of the track without modulation and changes... the leads need more life, bring modulation, put lfo everywhere u can.
mix-wise, i want more punch and air. also i think u need to cut the track to 7-8 mins but make it more interesting and diverse.
i think you have the ear, but the production skills need more training.
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Thanks for this feedback makus;)
For the bass, i am right there is a mistake beacause i make a pattern with a lead and bass togheter, so i put the volume more down and you not heard very well!thanks for this, i see another thing to change:)
For the rest of production , i improve it with a sound engineer next week for better i hope!but i must change and put more automation actually!
A lot of people says, it's a little too long so I agree
thanks for all, it's a great forum
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makus
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Posted : Feb 22, 2012 18:34
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ohm mind
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Posted : Mar 13, 2012 16:19
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Hey , I re-up the page!
I have posted yesterday my track mastered, it's not still really finish !
Some mistakes in level and I must making other percussion!
If anyone have advice for more better tell me guys:)
When it's really finish, I making a good post for it;)
Thanks for this forum, i am waiting your advice!
cya
http://soundcloud.com/ohm-mind |
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