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exkor
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Posted : Feb 15, 2010 07:57:02
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exkor
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Posted : Feb 17, 2010 08:51
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dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Feb 18, 2010 02:22
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+1 but...
i think in some parts you over use your melodies and you can make it shorter.
another thing is that the track is very stable. if you want it like this it's ok. i prefer more lifts and "In your head" parts in fullon. but great sounding and development. |
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exkor
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Posted : Feb 18, 2010 03:36
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Feb 18, 2010 07:34
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Its nice i liked a lot the guitars did you play them yourself? I just dont like when kick and bass come to the guitars but its kind of your choice.
+1 btw 
 ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive |
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exkor
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Posted : Feb 18, 2010 23:20
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dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Feb 20, 2010 23:07
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1. i like the intro. but i think when the kick and bassline starting to play it's not strong enough. so i think if you take the this pad that you use there and mute it for 1 bar before the bassline start playing it would be more powerfull.
2. the lead that start playing at 1:23 i think it would be nicer with more reverb (if it has at all)
3.the part that between 2:00-2:30. if you want to shorten the track i think you can cut it.
4.the melody between 3:00-4:00 is good but overused. when the bells start to play the melody i think you can cut it. maybe i would've cut also 8 bars more from the melody.
5. 4:50-5:15 i think a big crazy uplift can be very cool there
6. 5:15- 6:10 i think you can shorten this part 8-16 bars.
7. from the bigger view. you can shorten almost every part, becasue each melody (and you play a lot) you play for a long time. i think you should choose 2-3 melodies to be your highlights
at the track. it's just my point of view. there are no rules of course and you seems to have bigger experience than mine. just my opinion...
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exkor
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Posted : Feb 21, 2010 10:36
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Chichke thanks for the details review, I got very similar comments from other friends which is great, cause this means the problems are visible and same to all people and I can fix em. Especially the bells, nobody liked them, they all say "what is it? you give me karahanot adn then this stupid bells?" 
thanks for your time I will fix this track soon
cheers!
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Psybro
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Posted : Feb 23, 2010 06:22
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all i can say is : S.I.C.K
Bo0M! |
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vipal
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Posted : Feb 23, 2010 21:48
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too melodic to my taste, but good drive, happy music, guitars = 0, overall nice
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exkor
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Posted : Feb 25, 2010 01:08
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