psypersia
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Posted : Feb 10, 2011 01:46:28
hey guys here is the new track i'm working on ...
do u thinks its too suby?
its not completed yet...
any compliment are welcome ...
if i made any mistake in mixing can anyone help me i really appreciate it ...
since i don't have a pair of monitors and i mix with AKG K171 MKII...
so anyone with monitors can listen to this and help me out thx alot
jeeboomba
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Posted : Feb 11, 2011 18:43
hey man, the intro is cool.. u record the guitar? but suddenly after intro this thing starts and its very harsh.. and work more into making the sounds evolve from one to another.. i hope you get what i said.. peace
Freeflow
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Posted : Feb 11, 2011 20:56
I think you need to work with more musical elements to give this track a character, so play around with synths and make motifs and cool effects and delays swirling around, and all those sweet stuff,
its a solid foundation to work on...
btw i dont like the electric guitar in the end, but if you like go a head, but i would make only some hits with that sound and add long delay, maybe 1/8 or just experiment what sounds good, but it gets too crowded and is not so story telling, more question and answer motifs would be nice
