psyviz
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Posted : Aug 19, 2010 23:15:29
Hi everyone i made another track i hope you like it and please feel free to leave comments
Its a little cazzzy
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psyviz
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Posted : Aug 20, 2010 13:37
If the first soundcloud player is not working try this one..
psyviz
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Posted : Aug 23, 2010 15:26
Hi everyone ...have you got any comments for me about this track?
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Posted : Aug 23, 2010 23:33
willsanquil
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Posted : Aug 24, 2010 00:44
Great job man! Really cool track, kept my interest through the whole thing - lots of variation and cool shit going on all around - I would dance to this.
As for mix critiques or w/e the only thing that really jumped out at me was some lead sound that comes in @ 2.26 and leaves @ 2.36, sounded a smidge too loud compared to the other elements - kind of shocked my ears a bit - but maybe thats what you were going for
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Posted : Aug 24, 2010 02:41
Good one, its got a very nice bass groove and progression. Cool fx work and breaks. Main gripes are the near absence of percussion and the overall tinny sound, the only thing with any oomph is the kick bass. Make this track come out of the speaker and slap the listener around a bit peace, keep it up.
psyviz
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Posted : Aug 24, 2010 15:05
Wow thanks guys. I just woke up and read your comments and i am truly happy that the song has some good characteristics
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willsanquil i used the my favorite bass synth the famous vb1 for the bassline..
I am not sure if its the lead sound you are referring to @ 2.26 or the distorion thats 2 high .. because @ 2.26 its a break and has loads of distortion i have noticed that it does get a little shocking and the volume seems higher i will try do something about it
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FallowSlave i think i know what you mean about percussion, unfortunately i am lacking a bit, but as i get better i will try make better percussion loops to full up the gaps
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Well THANK you all for your comments keep in touch...
Kind Regards
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Posted : Aug 24, 2010 18:52
i'll give you some hints for your mix.
your kick sounds liitle bit dull like you have put an lp filter on it or something. it lacks punchiness. compressor on it or raise some high frequencies of it can help you to acchieve some punch to it.
and closed hh on the kick can help you as well.
you bassline needs some work as well. i think that today's there are much better vst's for making basslines than vb1, altough i heard some realy good basslines that were created with vb1.
your open hh is totaly sucks....awfull sample.
your mix lacks high's. and you can raise 1-2 db for the bassline.
http://www.youtube.com/user/ChichkeMultiTech http://www.soundcloud.com/chichke http://twitter.com/chichkemusic http://www.facebook.com/chichke
peace, keep it up. 