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IndiAlien
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Posted : May 22, 2006 06:23
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Fourbo
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Posted : May 22, 2006 10:12
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Nice track, good job on the editing
Maybe you could stretch a bit the track by developing the piano melody at the end?
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dE.Tonatik
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Posted : May 22, 2006 11:39
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nice 1 dude ..sounds good with those gothic kind of samples running behind ..kik bass is good ..may b little more hat work will do it good n also u should also try some twisted vocal work on dis 1 ....my 2 cents .. 
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IndiAlien
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Posted : May 23, 2006 21:20
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thanks for listening guys
all feedback is good.
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IndiAlien
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Posted : Jun 8, 2006 02:48
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Nocturnal Wizardz
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Posted : Jun 9, 2006 02:35
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my ysi doesnt seem to work since a few days :S
Mr. P sendspace or something ?
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IndiAlien
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Posted : Jun 11, 2006 17:24
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try this baba.... i noticed that my levels are little humped.... the bass cracks a bit, but still tell me whatu thinketh
http://www.sendspace.com/file/sklez1
yalla habibi !
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Yellow Warrior
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Posted : Jun 13, 2006 15:30
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Pretty decent sounds but don't like the bassline one bit, Sorry!! It seems like the notes are overlapping or something.
Kick is too low, can barely hear it.
Am sorry boss but didn't listen to the whole track. The bassline really put me off!
You need to do loads of work on the K&B It has to be strong, VERY STRONG!!! also percussion. Thats the foundation thats gives all thr rhythm and groove. work hard on that, even if it takes you a week! must get that right and then slowly your track will evolve, you keep getting ideas and moving forward.
Atleast it helps me with my music. Maybe because i dig those bitching basslines and Kicks!
Good Luck man and keep working.
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IndiAlien
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Posted : Jun 17, 2006 00:05
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thanks for the feedback Bharath... ur right, the kick bass are really not nice.
i'll have to start again with them
pls check out my new track n tell what u think.... its actually the first track i ever wrote, recently updated.... still far from finished tho.
boom boom
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