ierofante
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Posted : Sep 13, 2011 00:43
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[I listened to the second one]
I don't liked the intro so much... I felt it was too much noisy, with unpleasant clicks (bad audio quality). The same goes for the near-end breakdown.
About the rest of the song... I think you have a lot of work to do on both your overall sound quality and single instruments...
Don't take it personally, but I think that the bass is horrible, I don't ever imagine how can you do such bad. The ending melody is awful and unpleasant... And the rest of the song is more or less the same drum pattern that goes on, and on, and on... Boring. The effects are kind of ok, but their quality is still very bad. By the way you have lot of room for improving, and I hear that there are some good ideas, but not well developed a lot.
If you want I can tell you some more detailed advice on how to improve... Hope you are not angry, that was my honest opinion brother.
Wich equipment are you using? |
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