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two new girl robot tunes
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andykisaragi
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Posted : Mar 11, 2004 14:02
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billy ambulance
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Posted : Mar 11, 2004 18:56
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artificail: very nice break at 3:30 but its not my style of trance. lack of power/drive in sound, like your track made of 16 channels (old-school)
also kick is very thin, needs boost in Eq.
nice ideas but they dont develope much.
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ketzah
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Posted : Mar 13, 2004 19:07
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Andy:
As billy said "nice ideas".
Even though your track needs better production.
You should arrange it according to your imagination, that´s what this is all about.
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andykisaragi
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Posted : Mar 15, 2004 12:04
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cheers for your comments guys.. I would work on the production but my laptop has just died which is a bit of a fucking nightmare as i'm supposed to be doing a live show next week... but er yeah, one day i'll upload better versions, not for a while though
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Kaz
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Posted : Mar 15, 2004 16:02
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Artificial Lifeform: Nice and funky groove going on there, structure is well built for the dancefloor... The break is well executed - but perhaps at 4:09 you shouldn't let the bassline enter, but wait with it 4:35, and then also make a more dominant hihat sequence to enter there as well, just for the dancefloor's sake - as the track feels very monotone at this point. Maybe switching to a different percussion loop (or adding another one) is also in order after the break, this would add a lot of color to things.
Loved the part at 6:05-6:34 - perhaps moving this bit to after the break and then going for a fuller flow from there to the end would also work.
I like, but this track can go farther.
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motorik
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Posted : Mar 16, 2004 10:46
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Artificial Lifeform:
Nice style i like it very much!!!
kick could be more powerful.
At approx. 2:00 There is a small tick on the vox saying robot in delay , i think you didin't mean it. it's not big but still audioable.
the stop at 3:30 is great, really good one and you could make a lot more powerful return IMO ,it comes back with the same energies
and even less because i waited for a development,
all in all i realy like your style.
keep up the good work.
salute
motorik
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