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twisted dark-on whatever ;] would like to hear some feedback 146bpm
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no_logic
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Posted : Aug 23, 2010 23:18:55
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FallowSlave
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Posted : Aug 24, 2010 02:53
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Atmospheric intro! Those always give me a hard-on  I like how this one is building up, cool synth work. Sounds are nice, clear and have room to breathe. Maybe missing some kind of theme? I really like that sound coming in after the 3 min mark, sets a cool sinister mood. These kinds of nice gradual progressions I have much difficulty making, respect. Not a fan of the pitch going up trick. Breakdown/buildup a bit weak. Groove kicking back in very satisfying, driving bass doing its job and that lowfi perc loop is great. Again feeling that some kind of overarching theme is missing in this segment, a climax of some sort would be nice.
Solid tune, impressed by your sounds. Peace, keep up the good work. |
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no_logic
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Posted : Aug 25, 2010 13:30
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Cardinals Cartel
Black Machine
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Posted : Aug 25, 2010 13:47
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I miss more action in the intro (Sounds here and there) Its very eazy taking an movie sample and put it in without doing somthing on , Work hard and dont look for the eazy work , The intro is the 'Face' of the all track , And look whats happen when track strat All go's down . there good ideas in but you should work on your sound by bring the track be more here , Open and grand . Eq , Better mix - Kik and bass must be more involved and in the front . Try change the hh from time to time .
Man .. This is not Dark , Cant feel it in im sorry .
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