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Trying to make some goa...

goatrancejp
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Posted : Apr 18, 2014 14:10:15
Hi guys im working on a new track of goa....

id like to receive some feedbacks

https://soundcloud.com/fractalsounds/neutronstars-astral-galaxies-demo
basefree
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Posted : Jun 5, 2016 23:15
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On 2014-04-18 14:10:15, goatrancejp wrote:
Hi guys im working on a new track of goa....

id like to receive some feedbacks

https://soundcloud.com/fractalsounds/neutronstars-astral-galaxies-demo



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basefree
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics :  14
Posts :  48
Posted : Jun 5, 2016 23:23
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On 2016-06-05 23:15, basefree wrote:
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On 2014-04-18 14:10:15, goatrancejp wrote:
Hi guys im working on a new track of goa....

id like to receive some feedbacks

https://soundcloud.com/fractalsounds/neutronstars-astral-galaxies-demo



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Ok so I looked at your page...

1) The kick to me is kind of annoying and isn't really danceable. I feel like it's got way too much high end punch on it.

2) The mixing with the percussion needs some work. I feel like it could definitely be brought out more.

3) The kick just hurts my ears (I'm just posting while listening to: https://soundcloud.com/fractalsounds/sets/neutronstars-original-mixes)

4) You need breaks in the track.

5) Halfway through I feel like you need a hook of some kind. Everything is kind of layered and needs to have some kind of "catch."

6) The spacey effects are pretty nice...but again the kick is abrasive.

7) Overall I feel like if you refined the kick, brought out the percussion (refined that), and let the leads play you could have a cool twist on some darkpsy.

That's just my two cents.

Keep it up!
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