psyraal
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Posted : Apr 17, 2011 16:40:07
Hi super heroes, how's your neighbor?
You know, after so many hours putting down a piece to your liking, you get that puzzle effect, after a few hours everything sounds nice and clear to you, and when you hear it the next day you realize something is off.
So you can help me turn this into a better piece, if anything jumps to your ear, let me know. Thanks
Let the tune have it.
EDIT: Work in progress, 4:04 is all you can get at the moment - oh and the tune is called 'Tripping On Core'.
@blueball - don't you dare come here to post other folks posts, thanks and piss off.
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Posted : Apr 17, 2011 22:31
Hold your horses .. Where the bass ? From 00:26 to 02:06 Almost can hear there is somthing that call bass in it , Then at the break the vol' jump up (The same as the intro) And again .. The bass is somwhere there hiding in the background , And same till the end of the track .
Sure there interesting sounds in but first you should work on your mix so we can hear each sound , Better eq , Power and more effects on the down area . By now this track is drive to nowhere fix it up , Bring more atmos and mellos and all be fine .
Keep it up .. !
psyraal
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Posted : Apr 17, 2011 22:51
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Hold your horses ..
My horses are hold, but you still need to piss off thou.
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Where the bass ? From 00:26 to 02:06 Almost can hear there is somthing that call bass in it , Then at the break the vol' jump up (The same as the intro) And again .. The bass is somwhere there hiding in the background , And same till the end of the track .
The bass is where it is supposed to be, but i guess we have different definitions for how a bass should sound like.
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Sure there interesting sounds in but first you should work on your mix so we can hear each sound , Better eq , Power and more effects on the down area
Are you drunk? You first say i have to make sounds more clear and then you say to put more effects on the lows, that only leads me to think you don't know what you're talking about
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By now this track is drive to nowhere fix it up , Bring more atmos and mellos and all be fine.
Maybe its supposed to be a danceable tune, not an atmosphered one, have you thought about that?
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Posted : Apr 17, 2011 23:52
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On 2011-04-17 23:36, NychroLogic wrote:
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On 2011-04-17 23:24, jekvan wrote:
You might need be a bit nicer thought,don't know about your tune.
I need to be a bit nicer?
yeah i agree. you're a douchebag!
psyraal
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Posted : Apr 18, 2011 00:02
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On 2011-04-17 23:52, blueball wrote:
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On 2011-04-17 23:36, NychroLogic wrote:
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On 2011-04-17 23:24, jekvan wrote:
You might need be a bit nicer thought,don't know about your tune.
I need to be a bit nicer?
yeah i agree. you're a douchebag!
Ever noticed i'm a douchebag to you only? Because you were acting like a freaking spammer, using my and other guys words in several threads.. Or did you miss that?
Anyway this is getting of topic, now wonder so many good people just don't come here anymore https://soundcloud.com/neervos
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Posted : Apr 18, 2011 01:00
yeah, actually, dude, you do come off as a bit of a douchebag in almost every post on this forum. just sayin', in case you weren't aware of that.
as for the tune, solid, mate. good darkpsy. it has a lot of speed and energy but i think you would deal well woth some more atmosphere, perhaps some chordal pads. take this with a grain of salt - i don't listen to this kinda stuff very often, but to me dark psytrance is incredible when there is a break with some sparse effects and even a simple evolving pad. Dance, even if you have nowhere to do it but your living room. ~Kurt Vonnegut
www.soundcloud.com/mixyott
psyraal
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Posted : Apr 18, 2011 01:01
alright, but where do you see me being a troll? if i offended anyone i apologize.. really
https://soundcloud.com/neervos
loki
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Posted : Apr 18, 2011 01:09
sorry, i edited my post. troll is a stronger word on a forum, my apologies for using it.
you just post a lot of condescending, generally negative stuff. that's all. i don't want to harp on it - this is the workshop, after all - i'm here to share and hear new music really, this whole thread is pointless.
when you fully finish the tune, or finish your next, post it up here and don't totally flame the second guy who gives an opinion - which you asked for - and then says "keep it up!"
many people post here to 'give back' to a community where they will probably post their own music, wanting real critiques and advice.
Dance, even if you have nowhere to do it but your living room. ~Kurt Vonnegut
www.soundcloud.com/mixyott
psyraal
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Posted : Apr 18, 2011 01:15
Ok, thank you, i was just pissed at @blueball for his copy/paste on every thread here in the workshop (that type of spam causes nice folks to walk away) - But thats behind me now, at least he started writing.
As for the negative stuff, i actually read all my posts in this section, and i was just trying to help out, i gave some tips, short texts, long texts etc, but i haven't read any post of mine saying anything negative to the other guys or their music, just tips.
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Posted : Apr 18, 2011 08:19
+1 on the use of atmos.. kik bass i like.. i felt perc can be worked on more.. some good groove will do the trak good..
post when updated.. peace
re-arrange what you thought was real
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Posted : Apr 18, 2011 16:20
^^^ ?????
I don't know whats going on with the posts above, but good on you for nailing blueball!! I almost took his advice when he posted it on my thread, until I read it somewhere else exactly the same for a completely different style! He is really the retard, wasting our time with random suggestions that don't apply.
Anyway, with the tune:
- I like the vibe
- Good note choice
- Good ideas
- Interesting structure
Maybe to look at - it might be too busy in the band from top end of synths -> cymbals -> effects (4kHz and upwards?)
If you can get some more definition here, perhaps by making some of the sounds short and sharp, and the longer sounds set in their own frequency that doesn't interfere with the other sounds like the synth melodies, it may make the overall mix tighter and more defined.
