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Posted : Dec 28, 2011 10:37:12
Hello
Here's my 2nd trance track made up in FL Studio 10 and I used various plug-ins; it took me approx 3 weeks to make it; I worked for this track till I realized I just can't do better than that, for now... .
Plz just leemee know what you think about it, because I'm still a beginner in this kinda stuff, I don't have that much experience and I really wanna know if I should continue with this stuff or I'd better spend my time makin' something else...
Thx
Happy Holidays to everyone
ierofante
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Posted : Dec 28, 2011 14:26
To begin... You have to take better care of your subbass frequencies. I suggest to cut some lows to avoid kick and bass clash under 40hz.
Also, the track sound would be more pleasant with a more refined bass. Do you have fx on the bass? I think yes. You should get the best sound possible from synthesis before adding fx's, wich are not necessary at all.
The chord ideas for the melody are nice, but in my opinion you can do much better to entertain the listener. And also, use some more varied sounds... The lead (or bass?) sound is present from the beginning to the end of the song, and tires the listener easily.
Overall, the song structure is ok, I think you can try to focus on composing electronic music some more time and surely get much better results. You definitely have some attitude at this, I'm pretty sure you are not wasting your time. But I assure you it is difficult to make money with this kind of music...
