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organicparadox
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Posted : Aug 21, 2002 18:13
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okay so maybe i don't live in a trailer park, and maybe i do have all my teeth, but i watch jerry springer all the time!
with that said, do you you think you could take a moment to review my track?.....
thanks in advance guys.
http://organicparadox.com/01blink_tracks/organicparadox-grimmel.mp3
production notes: sound design in wavelab-v3/soundforge-v5/acid-v3, sequenced in reason-v2, mastered in t-racks.
humbly searching,
blink
www.organicparadox.com
ps. brutal honesty is always welcome
  www.organicparadox.com
In the 60's, people took acid to make the world weird. Now the world is weird and people take Prozac to make it normal. |
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ApsyDrop
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Posted : Aug 22, 2002 09:32
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All I can say is...
Sweeeeet Christ!!!!1
I'm loving this tune, dude!!!!!
Nice one!!! I like this kinda psytrance.... really psychedelic with some crazy percussive work.
Loving those pads that you've used!!!
Really eerie....man! Nice work!
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuck yeah!!!!!
Love the piano and the singing in the background..
I can definitely hear an infected mushroom influence here.... the kick, bass, percussion, and melodies all reak of infected.. but it still has an individual sound to it....
I can hear you've spent a whole lotta time on this song......
I love the last break... in the song.. that crazy synth is driving my brain crazy!
fuck dude..
... if you haven't been released yet.... there's something wrong.....with the way things work in the world!
Keep on rocking it dude!
PS Keep me posted on all your other tracks that you're writing.
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organicparadox
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Posted : Aug 22, 2002 20:15
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apsydrop,
thanks so much for the review! you've made my day!!!
this is the first track that i've felt was 'quality' enough to release to the forums. and your opinion gives me hope that i made something that may move a dancefloor someday soon.....
yeah, this particular track was heavily influenced by the infected style. their intricate use of melodies to haunt a track drove me to look deeper in my creative recesses. i was scared that i over did it.
if you (any of you) could review my other tracks that i've done, i'd really appreciate it. the link to my stuff is below.
http://organicparadox.com/01blink_tracks/
thanks again, and will definitely keep you posted on future works!
peace reside
blink
[ This Message was edited by: organicparadox on 2002-08-22 20:16 ] www.organicparadox.com
In the 60's, people took acid to make the world weird. Now the world is weird and people take Prozac to make it normal. |
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I.D.a.N
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Posted : Aug 22, 2002 23:43
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I have to give you props for this one, you got some skills. |
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Aurum
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Posted : Aug 23, 2002 00:07
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Yeah man here we got some deep psychedelic stuff!
Keep on the good work!
Greetings from Brazil! 
Aurum. |
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organicparadox
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Posted : Aug 23, 2002 21:28
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i was told in another post that my basses are to low for this track. did you think it was, or ist it just them?\
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PsyDiGoM
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Posted : Aug 30, 2002 19:39
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supporting the brazilian greet message... a really cool track man! |
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Adz Om
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Posted : Sep 1, 2002 09:09
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nice work with Grimmel!!!
hovering above a mystical lake 8] |
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Kaz
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Posted : Sep 1, 2002 14:26
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Bassline is too simple for this kind of track unless you intend to take it to a much more full-on direction. The volumes are not very accurate overall (bassline/bassdrum are too weak, and some SFX and percussion bits are too strong), but pretty nice for a draft. Very well executed break and all.
Work on the production a lot - clear up the sound, make everything sound perfect. Work on monitors. This one is (although not my cup of chai) a very well made track - as a draft. Take this to a proffesional level on technique/sound, release it.
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VertigOA
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Posted : Sep 9, 2002 20:45
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hey dude your track is pretty nice.
no sig |
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tom anteater
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Posted : Sep 9, 2002 21:06
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this is very psychedelic, the first time i've felt really disorientated at my desk at work could really 'upset' some on the dancefloor i suspect
nice work..
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Rabbitalien
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Posted : Sep 10, 2002 12:21
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An obscure track , with excellent production !
I realy loved some parts and i realy hated others, its a track made me feel intense positive and negative feelings. Maybe thats what is meant to do.
Sometimes reminded xenomorph (especialy the first minute) mixed with some psyko disko madness . A complex track overall . I liked the way that a bizzare melody jumps in the last 2 minutes but again the melody itself is realy weird and annoying for me.
I think that listened a track of yours in the past in the psynews.net contest , which had an absolute fantastic intro(one of my favorites track in that contest) .. I cant remember the name of the track.. Was That yours ?
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organicparadox
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Posted : Sep 13, 2002 20:34
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well i can't thank you guys enough. seriously, the comments from you have helped me re-evaluate my sound, and i have a much better understanding of my production flaws. hopefully, this next track will be good enough to one day move a dancefloor;)........
i'll be posting a link with my next track in about a month. its taken me a month just to get the bassline and kick down (i'm going real slow on production this time kaz:). but now that i have it, it sounds niccce! i'm really excited about where this track may be going.
to rabbitalien, yes i did submit a song into psynews.org. unfortunately, it wasn't mastered and sounded like crap compared to now. the name of the track is "horrofried", and can be found here: http://organicparadox.com/01blink_tracks/
thanks on the props for the intro. its long as hell, but very intricate. i wrote it for a halloween party in 2001.
peace to you all,
blink
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Gilad Refael
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Posted : Sep 15, 2002 03:44
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good job man...
i agree with kaz about the wrong volumes but the main thing is that the track is really good and i hope you will release it 
it really reminds me of dark soho
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Foka
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Posted : Sep 17, 2002 16:21
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This one is nice!!!
It's really weird ambiental psy stuff not my cup of tea but i think you shoulld go more on the dancefloor cos, maybe as some one told you before if you rebuilt the bass line and kick with higher volumes and lower the melodies and synths sounds it becomes more intresting.
Althrough you have the talent needed for sure just work more your prodution skills and rithms.
Keep working you'll have nice results!!! |
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