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fuzzikitten
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Posted : Jun 9, 2004 21:25
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OIL
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Posted : Jun 9, 2004 21:33
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ive listened to the whole track bro. ill try to give u some feedback.
in my opinion, the intro is way to long, its ok if its long, but then its gotta be interesting, this intro is not. its a little boring u see.
the kick is good, and the bass is also pretty good. try to use some more sounds. get some sample cds and stuff. always look for sounds inside the folder of a pc-game, ut2004 for example..,
i also would like to hear some more synths playing in the track.
what software u use?
any equipment? (hardware) |
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fuzzikitten
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Posted : Jun 9, 2004 21:35
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It's all software, main synths are Subtractor from Reason, Albino and Reaktor in Cubase.
Thanks for the feedback!
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nick
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Posted : Jun 9, 2004 21:46
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Why such low encoding bit rate and gaps? Don't worry about somebody stealing your work and making millions. You're not Paul Oakenfold dude.
The samples in the intro sound like you ripped the idea from Deedrah's Reload. Why do you submit us to so much of it? I agree with Setfan: it's very boring. I don't know man. Try to think up some original ideas. |
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fuzzikitten
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Posted : Jun 9, 2004 22:05
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On 2004-06-09 21:46, nick wrote:
Why such low encoding bit rate and gaps? Don't worry about somebody stealing your work and making millions. You're not Paul Oakenfold dude.
The samples in the intro sound like you ripped the idea from Deedrah's Reload. Why do you submit us to so much of it? I agree with Setfan: it's very boring. I don't know man. Try to think up some original ideas.
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I figured better safe than sorry, and if someone didn't like the track it would be because of the content and not the low encoding or gaps (say, the long intro, for example). 
Anyhoo, thanks for the feedback! |
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Nomolos(Zenon Rec.)
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Posted : Jun 9, 2004 23:02
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the little "better safe than sorry" move is not harmfull in this tracks case, it does not interfer in a critical way with the vibe of the track....
i must say the track is WAY too long and that contributes a lot to the "boering" feeling the guys here have....make it shorther...remove some ideas and i think it will "hold" a lot better....
u got some nice sounds and u can have a good build up with some cuts as i said....
i would think of changing some of the HH section and give it some variation....
good job,cheers.
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fuzzikitten
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Posted : Jun 10, 2004 14:40
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On 2004-06-09 23:02, djnomolos wrote:
the little "better safe than sorry" move is not harmfull in this tracks case, it does not interfer in a critical way with the vibe of the track....
i must say the track is WAY too long and that contributes a lot to the "boering" feeling the guys here have....make it shorther...remove some ideas and i think it will "hold" a lot better....
u got some nice sounds and u can have a good build up with some cuts as i said....
i would think of changing some of the HH section and give it some variation....
good job,cheers.
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Good points, thanks for all of them! One thing I want to do, after I finish the arrangement, is go back and add lots of little variations on the percussion work - but only after I've finalized the arrangement.
Thanks again for the comments!
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