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time perception (the nightmare of cake)

solipt1c
Soliptic
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Posted : Sep 12, 2003 03:10
http://www.transfigurate.com/dart/soliptic__time_perception_(the_nightmare_of_cake).mp3

a new tune!
bpm: 143
length: 7:45
style: melodic/morning/fullon/goa/ish

comments always very welcome           http://www.dartrecordings.co.uk/
solipt1c
Soliptic
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Posted : Sep 26, 2003 21:08
no one has any comments at all? :/           http://www.dartrecordings.co.uk/
Pavel
Troll

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Posted : Sep 27, 2003 10:47
Well i must say that this is a verrry impressive piece of work. Cosmosis and Hallucinogen influences combined with very nice percussion structure.
My only problem is the bass line.
I don't like it much.
But otherwise great tune.
One of the best in this section.           Everyone in the world is doing something without me
Mike A
Subra

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Posted : Sep 27, 2003 15:35
The bassline is too dirty, it has this "grrr" to it. Which is bad.
Try to make the leads stand out more, it's like all background sounds there, and there is no lead - which brings it to another problem. The overall feelings is like a mess. Again - put some instruments forward.

Really liked that break around 3:40 Althought the entrance after it was like "WTF???", in a bad way.
Overall, the track is great.
Just those things I told you
solipt1c
Soliptic
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Posted : Sep 27, 2003 17:07
thanks for the feedback guys, appreciated

i agree the mix leads to being a bit of a vague mess of noises- the kontakt lead thing is definitely a db or 2 too quiet, it needs to take focus more assertively, and the arpeggio things that come in later also dont demand the focus as well as they might.... fair cop

basically i sorta rushed the mix a bit... been planning to tweak it again definitely.

as for the entrance @ 4:16, the very first sound is too meek, needs more attack, but other than that i'm pretty happy with that bit... however if i do change the mix i'll have to do it all again anyway hehe           http://www.dartrecordings.co.uk/
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