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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Aug 24, 2011 10:57:09
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elastic_plastic
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Posted : Aug 24, 2011 16:13
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just heard ur stuff and i feel it still needs some work...
a few things tht catch my attention
1)the clap sample playing in the begining of the track is really sounding off... mayb u could change the sample or try and have a better eq on it.
2) the break in between - @ 1:27 tht break doesent really fit in well. mayb u can re-structure tht part again
3) decent build up and then again it picks up at 4:56 with the usual KBB pattern. I was waiting for the track to really pick up and it ended. what i would suggest is after 4:56 u can again build the track up with the usual KBB and den really go full on with the KBBB.
4)Overall mix is decent but still sounds a bit too dry to me- mayb try and apply reverb on some of the sounds will make it sound fuller/richer.
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Aug 24, 2011 16:22
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