Grevinsky
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Posted : May 13, 2012 15:03:55
Hello.
I am working with this track which i think im finished with.
Since i heard it too much now i have abit hard to mix it, and would be grateful for some other ears n mind to comment.
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Posted : May 14, 2012 01:23
This sound at 1:05 Nice track, I like how all the sounds layers talks to each other. Realize I need lot of practice yet
shellbound
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Posted : May 14, 2012 05:03
the mix sounds pretty good. everything is pretty balanced and no technical issues really stuck out.
i think the track is a bit too long and you have your ideas too spread out. i think you can make it a much stronger track by easily shaving off like 3 minutes and condensing some of the parts. i just found myself losing interest at different points. but you got my attention back at around 4 minutes and then again around 8 minutes. but that's pretty subjective. if you knew what you were going for and pretty happy with what you have, then that's cool. like i said, mix-wise, it sounds good.
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e-scape
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Posted : May 14, 2012 17:09
You need to boost kick and bass around the 60 hz area,imo.They sound a bit weak,what they need is a bit more energy .All in all mixing is good...
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Grevinsky
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Posted : May 14, 2012 17:42
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On 2012-05-14 17:09, e-scape wrote:
You need to boost kick and bass around the 60 hz area,imo.They sound a bit weak,what they need is a bit more energy .All in all mixing is good...
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Posted : May 14, 2012 20:45
I don't think it needs any boosting, the way it is is fine (for me anyways...)
I really enjoyed the journey, very psychedelic and trippy, great ambience/vibe.
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Posted : May 14, 2012 21:12
really liking the style in this track! melodic without cheese. inspiring work mate.
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Posted : May 14, 2012 22:10
sickkness!!, very nice unique style man,awesome atmospheres, arps, leads,melodies...really nice choice of sounds n layers not one sec i wanted to ff which is how should b, so many parts i love too many to list i wish i could give some feedback but this is too good, mix sounds very pro as well, only thing myb is the words at the very end, a few phrases hard to understand nothing some compression n delay tweak wont fix but then again myb thats how intended, imma continue listening to this on my ipod, keep it upp
Grevinsky
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Posted : May 15, 2012 13:10
Thank you so much for the warm comments. Made me very inspired to produce .
The problem i have is that my monitors only go to 55hz, so i dont hear the low end so well.
But i gave the low end some fatness with a sine, and some saturation.
Is this better?.
makus
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Posted : May 15, 2012 14:15
Maybe a bit better, yes. But the saturation ate the mid-freq clarity and bite of the bass, to my ear. Try to remove the saturation. Ultimately what you need to do is to make the bass produce the same low end content as your kick does, while the kick is not playing. That will create a constant low end going on www.overdreamstudio.com
Grevinsky
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Posted : May 15, 2012 16:45
Forgot too add the sine in the patterns .
I hope this gives abit more drive, very hard to know when you cant hear the freq´s.
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Posted : May 15, 2012 21:58
hi mate, i think you could have more sounds going on before 2.00, just my opinion... VERY COOL from 3.40 into the next section but 5.50 tho, the same groove is getting a bit repetitive, you could use some new sounds to change it up maybe? or shorten this section, or bring in the water sounds sooner? not sure... then at 6.46 you could consider making from striding bass line to kbbb? this might help keep things fresh and bring the track to the next level.
overall great track mate, i am not the best to comment on mix quality becuase i am on headphones, but it sounds not too bad to me tho. i would trust what makus says tho, he is a pro this song is 10 minutes long tho, so you have lots of ideas, I think you should condense them into 7 minutes and your track will be more interesting, move faster, and have more intensity. art is all about condensation keep up the good work!
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hollo321
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Posted : May 18, 2012 15:39
wow, another amazing track. You have great style and ideas, so much going on.. also think maybe a little too long, but still great journey and sound
Grevinsky
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Posted : May 20, 2012 15:37
Thank you so much for all the comments.
I adjusted a few things on the track, think its finished now.
Its about 1 minute shorter, fixed some breaks and added some tiny things.
And i took ure advice equilizyme with the Kbb on the later part, it sounded better.
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http://soundcloud.com/mechanical_species
Nice track, I like how all the sounds layers talks to each other. Realize I need lot of practice yet 
