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Posted : Jun 2, 2010 21:44:16
Sup guyz?
I'm currently working a melodic-psytrance thingie, and wanted to ask for you opinion and critique.
The track is not finished yet, and I know that there are some fuckups to fix.
Hmmm.. well here it is:
dj chichke
Chichke
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Posted : Jun 3, 2010 17:02
i like the style. i liket the track. but the overall sound is not so good. you need to work more on your mix. the balance between each sound and the clarity of the mix.
i like even the sounds you choosed.
i'm not sure about your kick and bass. they not loud enough at the mix and not clear enough. the kick should be punchier. put on it also nice closed hh.
put low pass filter on everything except kick and bassline. cut low frequncies from the hh and raise the high frquencies of them.
work on your mix and it will be great track!
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Posted : Jun 3, 2010 17:17
Thanks for the comment dude.
About the mix, that's what I meant when I said there are some fuckups, I still haven't mixed it properly.
And thanks for the advice about the low pass filter, gonna work on that. :]
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Posted : Jun 4, 2010 00:29
I agree with Chichke. The snare is too loud in my opinion. But the style is good! Keep pluggin away
=FullySick=
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Posted : Jun 4, 2010 14:22
Well, I'm done with the mixing & mastering, but there are problems with the soundcloud link..
So just go here:
dj chichke
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Posted : Jun 4, 2010 15:18
i like the track. but it still doesn't sounds pro.
it's not a matter of 2hours of mixing.
your sounds are not sharp enough. i don't know exactly what's wrong.
the bassline is not so good. i barely hear the bassline.
the hiats are not so good.
i don't like the kick so much. i think you use too much reverb on some of your leads and i guess even shity reverb. the built in plugin reverb maybe. your snare has too much reverb and it's not very sharp and punchy.
you can change everything i've just wrote in 2 hours but still it won't sounds pro. there is no explantion for it. . from track to track the sound is improving.
again your track is good. i guess after 2-3 more tracks you will be there....
