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Posted : Jan 23, 2014 15:21:43
Hello to this beautiful community!
This is my first post here and i want to share with you my latest piece of music,
Your comments are very valuable for me,
Thank you for your time,
Take care!
hnd
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Posted : Feb 7, 2014 22:20
I have to admit this track is original, different from everything I've heard today. That's very good, following your own path!
I would recommend paying more attention to sound design, for example the lead in the final part from 5:03 doesn't really work, applying some resonance doesn't make the sound psychedelic (of course if you wanted it to sound this way, then disregard my comment;))
And the transition around 5:00 could use some smoothing, right now it sounds a bit forced.
I think you're up to great stuff! Keep up
anato
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Posted : Feb 25, 2014 14:10
Thank you so much for your time to listen and comment!
Your feedback is very well appreciated!
it's so nice to read so good comments and precious advices,
Thank U!
CarlitoLove
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Posted : Feb 28, 2014 03:56
Yeah! I think (as hnd) that "you're up to great stuff"! Good themes ideas, and grooves...
You must work harder on the mix, you can get better sound if you fit every sound in a dedicated space in the spectrum & in the stereo.
Even the last part from 5:00 could work if you clean up stuffs!
