llama.exodus
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Posted : Feb 19, 2012 20:10
Awesome kick/bass drive man, prog feeling is well achieved in my opinion.
That transition in minute 4:23 is awesome, very trippy. It gets too melodic in that section between 5:20 to 6:15 but thats just my opinion, maybe some distortion or fx to the melody?
HH seem a bit too loud to my ears and you need to fill in more squelchy psy sounds for sure! hehehe
nice work
peace!
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Feb 19, 2012 22:29
i like your track, its good. well done. iv been trying to make some prog the last few months too. your tracks sounding good.
ierofante
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Posted : Feb 19, 2012 22:50
I think you are pretty good. The only thing I don't like much is the key sound that repeats itself too much from the beginning to the first breakdown.
It was very good the first time I heard it, but then it bored me.
How long have you been making music?
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nevarakka
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Posted : Feb 20, 2012 15:56
Thanks for feedback guys! IŽll make the changes and trying to finish the track within the week!
It started out pure proggy. (no melodic end) But i couldnt resist =).. So this track will have be a little more melodic.
Ierofante: IŽve been making music since 1994. Various styles...
