knocz
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Posted : Mar 2, 2015 13:26
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 good idea, but I think you should have put your personal thing into it, bringing it to the next level.. else wise it sounds like you just obtained and mangled the original samples around, with a butt-rock beat going on, glitching up the vocals..
There's no tension (even with the "arabic" girl singing, it doesn't bring up the tension like the original) and actually dies up towards the end
If you simply change the bass from the "K B K B" in the end after the break to a "K BBK BB", you can give the impression that the "track was sped up" while remaining in the same tempo, making it flow and creating a lot of energy. As it is now, it becomes a bit dull and powerless (which is the opposite of the original).
I think since you chose such an "epic" track, you should really overcome yourself and excel, and this has a lot of potential in creating the next hit.
Keep up the good work 
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